(quick n dirty) Fic: Exorcism

[mustinvestigate]

Title: Exorcism
Author: MustInvestigate
Disclaimer: I only own action figures
Rating: NC-17 for naughty thoughts
Character(s)/Pairing: Daniel/Rorschach
Warning: Unbeta’d. Male/male sexual activity and abuse of porn
Summary: Dan has a vivid and mean-spirited imagination.

Comments

[22by7]

Fuck, this is the first Watchfic I've read in weeks and it feels so good. You’ve known some truly asexual specimens in the depths of Harvard’s graduate laboratories. The world of co-ed mating rituals went on in a completely separate venn diagram from them, never splashing over to ripple the surfaces of their real obsessions. Rorschach, on the other hand, makes it his life’s work to get as close as possible to every perversion and be disgusted by it, gleefully meting out punishment. That is so good. So sharp. Ugh. I could go on. Also I have a huge kink for venn diagrams.

I was so into this fic that I managed to read the very last sentence as ending with 'a sea of furious nipples', and I have to say that kind of really worked, too, amazingly.

[mustinvestigate]

"Furious nipples" would be a great Slavoj Zizek title :)

Everything in life can be expressed via venn diagrams. Or at least I bet Dan believes so.

Glad you enjoyed this - I've got all these 3-page story fragments on my hard drive I'm trying to finish up now, so hopefully there'll be a few more soon.

[i_am_your_spy]

I was about to comment on how hot this was, and then you go and bring up Zizek and now I'm envisioning him writing a Lacanian analysis of Watchmen porn and laughing hysterically.

At any rate, I'll be in my bunk.

[mustinvestigate]

Hee - have you seen his Pervert's Guide to Cinema?

...and here we see how once again the action moves from the rooftops or sky to an alley or basement, symbolising the retreat from the world of superego to the id, where sexual connection can take place safe from the incriminating ghost of the parent's disapproval.

Zizek's totally a slasher :)

Er, what were we talking about?

[initial_aitch]

I wish you could hear my happy, contented sigh. The tension and provocation between them (coming from both sides, I think!) lead so deliciously to the smuttiness. Rorschach often antagonizes, doesn’t he, but Dan rarely responds. It’s the fans’ best fantasy to watch that tension inevitably snap...sexually, of course.

Ooo, Dan knows just how to push him around, just the way he needs. The concept of “denial” is so in alignment with Rorschach’s character. Not that I think of him as always making sacrifices, but like you said, he can’t be as asexual as he behaves. …all that warm, damp, naked skin…he’d have to touch it to push you away. How delightfully cruel. You do great work. Much appreciated.

[mustinvestigate]

You mean there are ways of snapping that don't involve sexytime?

...I may have been reading too much fanfic.

The two of them always seem to be equally in denial of who they are/what they want, and it's fun to smash the two together. I tried to have Daniel, fantasising that he was being ultra-dominant, actually be going through the victim's motions - but there's only so much thematic stuff you can put in a silly wank fic :)

[sandoz_iscariot]

Unfff. Delicious.

[mustinvestigate]

Glad you enjoyed :)

[findmyantidrug]

Hooo-ly shit. Hottest fic I've read in a looong time. I have been waiting for a fic where Dan comes on Rorschach's face, and finally, here it is. Here it is. Unf. You build up tension really well, and just...hot. Great job.

[mustinvestigate]

Funny enough, the facial is sort of my anti-kink (due to disastrous experimentation - suffice it to say, I learned to bring more then one pair of contacts on vacation :P), but it just freaking worked for me here. Maybe it's that damn mask... Glad you enjoyed!

[miss_bushido]

*Flails* Oh my god so hot! Unnnnf.

I love in control!Dan.

[mustinvestigate]

Dan is just sex on legs when he's aggressive...sans the late-era pornstache, of course! :)

[miss_bushido]

Mmmm YEAH he is.

Pornstaches only look good on certain people...and Dan is not one of them.