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Fic: Masquerade (Daniel/Walter) 1/2

Apr 22, 2009 23:10

Title: Masquerade (1/2)
Author: MustInvestigate
Disclaimer: I only own action figures
Rating: NC-17
Character(s)/Pairing: Daniel/Walter
Warning: Unbeta’d. Also, graphic male/male sexual activity and abuse of clubbing stereotypes.
Summary: Sundry ideas nicked from the kink meme. Rorschach secretly follows Nite Owl and Ozymandias’ investigation ( Read more... )

nite owl, fic, rorschach, movie!verse, watchmen

Comments 27

sweetphaex April 24 2009, 04:37:44 UTC

rolfed so hard at his disgust at the $7 cover charge XD

mustinvestigate April 24 2009, 19:50:16 UTC

I was so tempted to put in a scene of him actually waiting out front in line behind the velvet rope, all FFFFFFFFFFF! at the people surrounding him, and the charge being the last straw. But it got skipped as I wanted to get to the sexing that much faster :)

snake_easing April 24 2009, 17:36:28 UTC

Love the partners interacting and Ror. trying to hide in his journal, and this is an awesomely fierce version of Adrian, btw. Total asshole, but that just makes it better.

why do i not have an ozy icon? must remedy that mustinvestigate April 24 2009, 19:52:08 UTC

I was totally working out some personal issues from my clubbing years there :) Glad it actually worked with the character as well!

Re: why do i not have an ozy icon? must remedy that snake_easing April 25 2009, 21:48:12 UTC

What can I say? I just like him super-bitchy.

coldryuuza April 24 2009, 21:20:07 UTC

omg, Rorschach! you were so, so, so far off in this instance! lol. oh this is going to be fun

mustinvestigate April 27 2009, 18:48:26 UTC

I like to believe he only half believed his justifications, and that he had similar journal entries justifying him following Daniel to the laundromat, the library, the supermarket...heh. Stalking is love, with these two :)

22by7 April 25 2009, 08:29:26 UTC

COMBINATION BITE-HEADBUTT. No, you are a bizarrely brilliant genius, Mr. Kovacs. I love everything in this fic, including unsubtly chummy!Adrian and the clubbing stereotypes, but above all a winner is the immensely plausible ridiculousness of the things Walter does. Writing 'poetry' (heehee GINSBERG oh DAN ♥ you utter romantic) in the club? Check. Meeting new people was really more Rorschach’s thing? Check. Taking advantage of Daniel’s kind nature was Rorschach’s privilege, and no one else’s? Check. Yep, this is totally the same guy who jumps out of people's fridges. I just about died laughing.

On a more SRS note - you handle Walter's Issues pretty damn well. It is hard not to woobify him after this. :runs to part two:

mustinvestigate April 27 2009, 18:52:35 UTC

Someday, I swear, I am going to write an uber-woobie-Rorschach fic and get it properly out of my system :) It's Jackie Earl Haley's fault for being so damn adorable! Glad you've enjoyed this so far!

insaneslasher April 27 2009, 10:38:21 UTC

Not clean. Will notify Health Inspector.
This cracked me up.

It was the worst cola he’d ever drank, both too sweet and far too bitter. It tasted like the smell of a poisoned mouse rotting in the wall, corrupt and sickening.
Glad to meet a fellow diet cola hater.

mustinvestigate April 27 2009, 18:55:30 UTC

The really sad thing is, on the rare occasions I have a soda, it tends to be diet coke. I went on a sugar detox a few years ago (a mad dietician's magic solution for allergies, which actually kinda works), and haven't been able to manage the sweetness of proper cola since.

(And as I type, I'm eating the most enourmous chocolate-chocolate chip cookie - heh.)