Fic: Clean (Nite Owl/Rorschach)

[mustinvestigate]

Title: Clean (1/3)
Author: MustInvestigate
Disclaimer: I only own action figures.
Rating: eventually NC-17
Character(s)/Pairing: NiteOwl/Rorschach
Warning: Graphic m/m sexual activity
Summary: Hrm...I wanted to get Rorschach naked. So I packed every possible cliché around that idea and called it a story.

Comments

[letheron]

Walter slammed the door before popping the cap from the first sweating green bottle of ice-cold cola and decided Daniel could live another day.

As in "American Love, like coke in green glass bottles. They don't make it anymore."

I love you! And I am loving this fic - insanely much. *rushes on to next part*

[mustinvestigate]

Thanks! I did wonder if they still made it in green bottles whenever-the-hell-exactly this is set. And now I'm picturing that and wondering, since cola is dark brown, how exactly you'd know the glass color until you finished it anyway?

Hrm. Clearly, I need to go sleep now before I type any more. Glad you're enjoying it :)

[justapieceofme]

Well, you can see the bit of glass at the top?

When did my inner voice start dropping pronouns?

I've been wondering this exact thing ever since I discovered this fandom. XD

This fic is great. *Runs off happily to read the next part*

[mustinvestigate]

Glad you're enjoying this! (And I'm still having the dropped pronoun problem too :)

[capaow]

win win win!
I love how Rorschach can be bought with such trivial things like coke.
hahah
great story so far.
now I gotta go read the rest.
<3

[por_queeee]

This. Is. BRILLIANT!

I was going to list my favorite parts but there were far to many.