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Fic: Servants can play too - Part 2

Mar 21, 2010 01:00

Title: Servants can play too Part 2/4?
Author:mustbethursday3
Rating: PG/14 (although it's probably G) - I swore once, or Arthur swore, or whatever. Bad Arthur.
Characters/Pairings: Arthur/Gwen, Gwen/Merlin sort of.
Words: 2654+
Disclaimer: Merlin belongs to the BBC.
Summary: Prompt was: F-58. Merlin and Gwen need to play bf/gf OR hubby/wife for some reason, and they' ( Read more... )

fic: merlin, merlin

Comments 18

starry_laa March 20 2010, 15:10:56 UTC

Guinevere - she never seemed satisfied to be defined in any one way. It was both frustrating and exciting . . . and definitely a quality he preferred in her rather then Merlin.

I really liked that line. I liked Arthur's mind wandering, the G/M scenes (especialy the rehearsal) and Arthur's jealous dream, lol!!! Yay <3

mustbethursday3 March 22 2010, 10:44:02 UTC

Thank you for quoting :D I love it when people do that.

Arthur's jealous dream, lol!!! Yay <3

Hehe yeah, poor Arthur - I've started feeling sorry for him . . . which is weird.

I ♥ Gwen and Merlin (but not as much as A/G).

mag2425 March 20 2010, 15:18:43 UTC

So excited you updated!!!

Merlin is hilarious-adding character. Lol

Love Gwen's and Merlin's friendship. Their teasing and bickering with each other is so cute and funny.

Really liked Arthur's thoughts. He is so cute when he is wording about Gwen and Merlin together. I agree when he said their should be allowed to drink at meetings.

This was really great!! Can't wait for the next part. :)

mustbethursday3 March 22 2010, 10:48:57 UTC

Love Gwen's and Merlin's friendship. Their teasing and bickering with each other is so cute and funny.

Thank you ♥

And I'm glad you like my Arthur. I'll try and update soon, I think the next part will be about twice as big as this one.

starlitwisher March 20 2010, 17:43:23 UTC

I can't wait til Arthur sees the play!

mustbethursday3 March 22 2010, 10:50:39 UTC

Me neither!

. . . . now I just have to write it and not completely fail everyone's expectations :)

crazy4dw March 20 2010, 18:15:24 UTC

Oh gosh, I feel honored that you added some of Arthur's thoughts in the fic because of me! Arthur was absolutely PERFECT! He was the right combination of pensive and dopey. I can already feel Arthur's jealousy seething in the upcoming chapters!

But I have to say, my favorite bits have to be the Gwen/Merlin interaction. The jerk-brat exchange was so Winchester-like, I was squeeing so hard. And Merlin dressing Gwen was soooooooo sweet!!!!!!

Great update! Well done!!!! ;)

mustbethursday3 March 22 2010, 10:56:34 UTC

Oh gosh, I feel honored that you added some of Arthur's thoughts in the fic because of me! Arthur was absolutely PERFECT! He was the right combination of pensive and dopey. I can already feel Arthur's jealousy seething in the upcoming chapters!

Well, you were right. Arthur should be as funny as Gwen and Merlin (or it's not fair). And Thank you - glad to know you approve. I'm tossing up whether to go with seething or moping (moping's kinda funny and sad) at the moment.

Yep, my fav bits are G&M too. And HA! I was wondering where I got that (it was on the tip of my mind but I couldn't think of it) - Of COURSE Supernatural! How cute would Gwen and Merlin be as Dean and Sam? So cute.

Thanks, I'll try and update in the next few days. It's written but the question is whether it's good. SO I have to read over it a couple of times.

cifan70 March 20 2010, 22:02:35 UTC

I absolutely loved the chapter. I cannot wait to read what more fun you have for this story.

mustbethursday3 March 22 2010, 10:58:22 UTC

Thank you.

Hehe, I love comments. And it's good to know that people wanna know what comes next. I'd hate to bore you guys.