Comments | mustangeddie: ME Photography

mustangeddie

ME Photography

Aug 02, 2008 15:15

Had a chance to work with five different models last week. I was pleasantly suprised that all the scheduling worked out. Now I'm still overloaded with editing, but slowly making headway. Here are some samples of 3 of the girls. Probably the best shots with each. If anyone wants to comment.......PLEASE do!!!

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mustangeddie August 2 2008, 23:57:57 UTC

Thanks Kell!!! Most appreciated! Yeah.........hopefully there will be continued improvement the more chances I shoot. There is much more at Flickr where I've posted all my photos!! Was beginning to wonder if anyone ever read this. OH......all the photos are also on MySpace.....in case you get bored.......LOL

:D dynomoose August 2 2008, 21:29:07 UTC

they look nice but with Sarah, you should have positioned her arms differently, so as to diminish the appearance of armpit flab. If her right elbow had been on the step, this wouldn't have been an issue.

Re: :D mustangeddie August 3 2008, 00:00:22 UTC

Ahhhhhhh, good point!! Geezzzzzzz, someone actually giving constructive criticism!! Most appreciated. And.....she is the professional model of these 3. Guess we are all still in the learning mode.

Re: :D dynomoose August 3 2008, 00:16:35 UTC

The learning is the fun part!

cardboardrabbit August 3 2008, 03:22:46 UTC

I like the lighting in the first one. It looks so great on the models skin. The only thing that bugs me in the last two photos is that Roxy has no left arm and the man in Kristi's picture is looking away so far that it looks like he is straining.

mustangeddie August 5 2008, 21:20:08 UTC

All natural light on the first shot. There are many, many more I have yet to edit on all of these 3. I grabbed some of the best to edit and post. I was so liking Roxy's smile in her shot I didn't pay attention to the missing arm.....LOL. Chose the b&w photo because they were both looking in different directions....Like he was the lookout or being oblivious. I appreciate the comments on any of my photos to get that different perspective. Hope your driving is coming along!

cardboardrabbit August 5 2008, 21:46:20 UTC

What sort of editing do you do? I usually smart sharpen, clean up my skin and play with the coloring. I kind of what to get a job re-touching photos. Haha its something you really have to pay attention to. The shot wouldve been all sorts of perfect if she had a hand.

TBH it looks like hes straining his neck like he doesnt want to look at the model.

Pretty good. I have some appointments to go to tommorow so my Mom is gonna leave me her truck so I can go to them. Im a little nervous but Im sure Ill be fine.

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mustangeddie August 5 2008, 21:14:00 UTC

Thanks for all the comments!! Most appreciated. Always great to hear other takes since of course I'm a bit biased.....LOL. The "model" had done some shoots years ago so I guess she wasn't totally in the dark. The boyfriend was just going along with whatever seemed natural. More shoots coming for more practice. I think I learn something each time and eventually all the flash stuff will be added soon.