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musings_by_mama

Together (NC-17)

Aug 09, 2011 11:28

Title: Together
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4,478
Summary: Ron juggles working at WWW, helping the Order, supporting George and loving Hermione.
Warning: Tall redhead with a very big wand (not really a warning, just a yummy image), Drunken surly George acting like an arse.
Author's Note: Written for redheadsarehot based on her prompts at rhr_smutfest. Thanks to my beta urbanmama1 and ( Read more... )

nc-17, ron/hermione

Comments 16

anteevirus August 9 2011, 15:54:57 UTC

I feel like I've read this before. XD
anyways! This is so beautiful and I love George and I feel sorry for him at the same time...
anyways and the smex was always so delicious ;)

musings_by_mama August 9 2011, 16:24:00 UTC

This was originally posted on rhr_smutfest :D
Glad you liked it!

anteevirus August 9 2011, 17:50:00 UTC

Yeah, I did! I hope to see a continuation! *hinthintnudgenudge* ;)

lectura35 August 9 2011, 17:31:53 UTC

I really think George and Ron do need some closure and, very specially, George needs a kick on the balls from Ron!
Mourning or not mourning, drunk or not drunk, he clearly crossed the line this time and a good punch (and a good talk) could set him straight. Just my thoughts :)
I´ve said this before, but this is an wonderful story! :)

musings_by_mama August 10 2011, 01:39:16 UTC

Thanks love! Ron needs to let George know that such behavior WILL NOT be tolerated! :D

kingeomer2 August 9 2011, 19:03:14 UTC

Great work as always. I would be thrilled to read another chapter to see Ron and George have some closure.

musings_by_mama August 10 2011, 01:37:45 UTC

Thanks! George was a jerk - I hated writing him like that but I needed to do it - it wasn't all sunshine and daises for the poor Weasley boys :( Thanks for taking the time to read and review - I'm glad you like it!

tpanderson August 10 2011, 01:32:32 UTC

Always love your stories. I definitely think a bit of a chat with George would be good. I think actual 'closure' would be a bit quick, no? If you were planning on a couple more chapters you could flesh it out and have George open up a bit. However I wouldn't want it getting in the way of any R/Hr lemons!

musings_by_mama August 10 2011, 01:36:14 UTC

'closure' might not have been the right word - nothing final can be resolved that quickly. I just think George's behavior should be addressed and Ron needs to start making some decisions that benefit him (and Hermione of course).

Thanks for taking the time to read and share your opinion!

weloverxher August 10 2011, 03:25:01 UTC

Hi!!
I was a little scared of George's behavior with respect to Hermione, but I relied on his proposal that George was upset (and drunk) and (maybe)the problems he may be facing with Angelina...
I think you should promote that Ron has a great conversation with his brother and make everything clear. If George continues to be an asshole, so Ron give him a kick in ass and everything is solved =D

His story was really HOT, however, brilliant, as usual! I love how Ron is funny, dominant and so gentle at the same time!!
Thanks for sharing!!
Mil Bjs,
Vivi