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Making Up Is Hard To Do ... But So Worth It (PG)

Jul 02, 2010 17:07

Title: Making Up Is Hard To Do ... But So Worth It
Rating: PG
Prompt: Ron and Hermione making up after an epic row
Word Count: 744
A/N: So sorry, wordsmithsonian , I think you may have had a more 'adult' situation in mind. Hey, at least I'm writing something!

( Making Up Is Hard To Do ... But So Worth It )

ficlet, ron/hermione, pg

Comments 11

honourweasley12 July 4 2010, 17:32:56 UTC

What a beautiful missing moment. Your writing, as usual, conveys them perfectly. Wonderful job!

*shakes fist at Bill for his interruptions*

heart_eyes23 July 6 2010, 03:55:12 UTC

Here from obhwf_weekly, I hope you don't mind.

I thought this was really well written and realistic. I loved Ron's voice in this, how contrite and sweet he can be. I also found it really true to the teenage condition, that they found it easier to be honest with one another when there was a physical barrier between them, so they didn't have to see the effect their words had. Not only did it ring true, but it made for an interesting scene.

Lovely job!!