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Drabble H-Honesty

Apr 20, 2011 21:29

Title: Hurting Inside
Rating: K+
Genre: Angst/Hurt/Comfort
Cu/Au: Cu
Pairings or Characters: Kaoru
Warnings: Somewhat depressing yet uplifting (hopefully), one bad word (you should be able to handle it)
Summary: On the outside, he was just another pretyt rich boy, just feeling a little off. On the inside, he was hurting, and couldn't bring himself to say ( Read more... )

drabble h: honesty, author: nimash_123

Comments 3

enigmaticrose4 April 21 2011, 11:27:07 UTC

The feelings in this were so raw - it was amazing. I'm guess you've been depressed before or are depressed now, you pegged everything too well to not have felt those feelings yourself.

Please, keep this up, that was amazing. :)

grim_dreamer April 21 2011, 20:14:53 UTC

Well, if you think I don't know how it is to feel down, then I'm not the artist or human being I claim to be. Thanks for the honesty you brought not only through the character and subject matter but also for drawing on what seems to be a personal experience. We write the best when we are honest with ourselves and can share a bit of this honesty with others. I think the important thing about the subject is not why someone feels the way they do, but that people can understand and support that individual without having to really know why. We definitely get this from what you've written. So take it easy, okay? You wrote this perfectly. Who could possibly say anything less? (And I'm not saying this just because you asked me not write "harsh, blunt comments". You're a talented writer, remember that!)

goldfishlover73 April 28 2011, 01:31:53 UTC

The ending was very uplifting.
This was very beautiful sad. I love all the emotion, the descriptions and Kaoru's struggle.
But, really, I think that even though Hikaru can be dense, I think that he would notice something like Kaoru losing 15 pounds.
But that's just me being stupid.
Fantastic job.