Drabble H: Honesty

[lostinlife88]

Title: My Sincere Honesty
Rating: K
Genre: Romance
Cu/Au: Cu
Pairings or Characters: An ex-fangirl and Kyouya
Warnings: Poem like always

Comments

[nicluv1787]

Ouch. I liked the one two punch feel. This was very Kyoya, from a 'ex-fangir's' perspective. Very well managed and believable.

[goldfishlover73]

This was really good. I have a few comments take them or leave them.
When writing a poem, using commas create pauses/breathes. I'm pretty sure that when you change stanzas, that's where you're breathes are? I don't really have a place as a good example, because I'm not sure how it was that you wanted it read, besides...with no breaks except at the stanzas...man, I hope this makes sense.
But! I love how it doesn't rhyme! That is the best part! (besides her conviction)
Wonderful.