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Wild Card #41: Commoner's Coffee

Mar 05, 2011 16:37

Title: Next in Line
Rating: K
Genre: Coming Of Age. ^_^ And humor.
Cu/Au: CU
Pairings or Characters: Shiro! The bad boy type!
Warnings: Nothing :)
Summary: The pressure's on when you're next in line.

( Next in Line )

wild-card_41: commoner's coffee, author: violetcharms

Comments 4

nicluv1787 March 6 2011, 01:41:31 UTC

What a fun juxtoposition, Shiro and Tamaki. I loved his mocking reflection's advice, I could imagine him talking to himself in that manner.

The parrallel between the first episode and this was well done and hilliarious. Great use of prompt.

aimee_blue March 6 2011, 15:54:54 UTC

Oh the hilarity, I love the line;
Shiro was out of the door before someone could say ‘it’s not trash - it’s a hamster home’. It made me grin.
The little hints of Tamaki in this piece are darling and Shiro's bluntness 'Instant coffee was… gross' is perfect.

enigmaticrose4 March 6 2011, 17:15:16 UTC

Hehe, that was quite cute. Shiro doesn't get enough attention. I will say that the ending doesn't seem as strong as it could've been. But it was still great.

grim_dreamer March 7 2011, 09:36:50 UTC

*Beelzenef chuckle ( ... )