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musicforwolves

Fic: 'Three Deep Breaths' (5/25)

Oct 10, 2010 03:26

Title: Three Deep Breaths
Fandom: The Matrix
Characters: Mouse/Zephyr (OC)
Word Count: 954
Prompt: From fanfic25, 5/18: 'Zen'.
Notes: Contains medium-level m/m. Dudes go at it.
Summary: ( When he thinks of Zephyr, Mouse can't relax. )

fanfic25, writing, matrix

Comments 1

jean_c_pepper October 9 2010, 17:26:01 UTC

Ok, I am totally blown away. First of all, what I love about your writing is the way you mix in all the little details, like Switch keeping a garden and Tank and Dozer being zen like(which would fit their devotion to Morpheus).
This was fantastic. I really like Mouse/Zephyr. Your fic is fast becoming addictive. I like the way that you're painting their early relationship--the constant hunger, shyness and anxiety that accompany that.
I can't wait for you to write more!