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Fic: 'Someone Else's Heat' (3/25)

Sep 19, 2010 04:01

Jaysus, the list of details gets longer every time I do this. A case of TM;DR?

Title: Someone Else's Heat
Fandom: The Matrix
Character: Mouse/Zephyr (OC)
Word Count: 987
Prompt: From fanfic25, 5/5: 'Fire'.
Notes: Contains non-explicit dudes who like dudes.
( Summary: Everyone here is unique in some deeply meaningful way. Mouse is just cold. )

fanfic25, writing, matrix

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jean_c_pepper September 27 2010, 10:58:00 UTC

This is absolutely the BEST story. This is the 10th or so time I have read it and I just love it. I like it because you've chose to write about Mouse and it's nice to see another character's take on life outside of the Matrix.

musicforwolves September 27 2010, 12:40:32 UTC

Okay, I actually just squealed with glee, because a) it's nice to get feedback, and b) I am procrastinating like hell on an essay I don't want to write, so it's nice to return to something I did enjoy writing.
Zephyr may be a recurring character over this series, as I'm enjoying the way it all fell into place - I'd like to explore their hijinks a bit further. Thanks for the comment!

jean_c_pepper September 28 2010, 22:11:26 UTC

I would definitely read it. I read the others in the series and again, I like your take on life outside the Matrix and outside the limited view of Trinity, Neo and Morpheus. Mouse is very much the representative of all the unknown unplugged humans serving with the Zion fleet(as is Zephyr)

musicforwolves September 30 2010, 11:34:00 UTC

Also, I still have three spots left open for prompts, and it feels somewhat too easy to write them myself. Care to contribute one?

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