The Unknown- Poem

Oct 22, 2008 17:03


Ten thousand shadows descend upon a world that never was

A lost cry from heaven. swallowed in the blackness of dying doves

The only one left standing, I am lost in the noises, the fading buzz

Of bodies and minds much stronger, being lifted into the glow above

I plant my worn shoes on the quiet pavement, refusing to budge

I will be remembered in ( Read more... )

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demenagurl August 20 2009, 03:45:36 UTC
I really liek this poew..I love reading them out loud to myself... is this froma book or have you written it? Whoever the author is...I mean this is some amazing stuff, its beautiful!

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musicbendr August 22 2009, 03:38:54 UTC
I wrote it, like, last November, I think. So thank you :]

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smilininmysleep August 30 2009, 03:50:49 UTC
Have you ever been published? Cuz this is really amazing.

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musicbendr August 30 2009, 12:37:43 UTC
I wish. Haha. I've never been published, no, but I'd love to be someday. Thank you for thinking I'm good enough to do that!

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smilininmysleep August 30 2009, 15:22:33 UTC
Just speaking th truth :)
ur writing is really amazing.

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