Fic: In the Line of Fire (W)

[dreaminthepast]

Title: In the line of fire (W)
Author: Sev-chu
Pairing: Jaejoong x Changmin, Yunho x Junsu (Yunho x ofc) Yoochun x ofc(s)
Rating: PG
Summary: Mob wars are painting the streets of Hong Kong and Japan red with blood ensnaring the rogue cop in its wake. Can Yunho find him in time to save him and is he ready for what he finds? Can the gangs unite to stop

Comments

[nuhaazmi]

omg is it done...
jaemin was amzzing
and jae when yunho was kissing junsu LMAO
i loved it so much :))))

[dreaminthepast]

Besides the already planned, horribly smutty epilogue? It is done *sniffle*

xD I loved writing Jae so much in this fic! That little twitch of crazy. Haha, he never misses a beat.

Thank you so much!!! ♥♥

[neoreulwonhae]

Aww, that's the end? :(

But YAY! I've really enjoyed reading this. Hope to see more work from you in the future! :D ♥

[dreaminthepast]

I wouldn't count out a smutty epilogue .... smutty epilogue....

Thank you so much, I had an amazing time writing it and just gobsmack-overjoyed that people loved it so much. I will definitely continue to write!
♥♥♥

[neoreulwonhae]

OMG SMUTTY EPILOGUE YESSSSSS. ♥

[zelshamada]

I'd read this whole thing in one day.

Dear God, that was good.

I love it¡ Really. Al the mob situation is the best ever, but your history is really AWESOME. God! I loved so many stuff in there I don't know where begin to say it!

Well, I can point my ultimate favorite: Changmin. Ohohohohohoh. I love this Changmin. And then is Jaemin, so is great (TEH BEST) because your Jaejoong is just incredible and awesome.

Your Chun and HoSu also have mi heart <3.

So, I loved it all. Changmin + little knife = the best kink ever.

Is there any epilogue? Jaemin/Hosu kinky, sweaty, hot, hot NC-17? xD *ignore me* (or not!)

Thanks for this history. It's just pretty great!!!

[dreaminthepast]

0.0 that was very ambitious of you!

Thank you so much. I really enjoyed writing in the mob!universe. It was a lot of fun. 8D I did a lot of research before I wrote it.lol So a lot of the little stuff is pretty real, or based on something that was/is real.

:D I'm so glad you enjoyed Changmin. The inner turmoil over straight vs. gay wasn't really as much as I wanted, but I had a lot of fun writing him, and of course Jaejoong. He's a lot of crazy. :D *stops babbling*

yes! Those little knives are so something sneaky!Min would have ;D hehe

There isn't an epilogue YET. But I am writing one. I've also re-edited the entire story and am going to attempt to put it into either a pdf file or post better links so the whole fic is in one post. When I finish the epilogue(s) I'll do that too ^^.

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!! ♥♥♥

[breakfastml]

The best mob related fic I'ver ever read!

Just so damn awesome! Everything was incredible~

So...I LOVED LOVEEED Jaejoong and that crazy thing of tasting his enemies blood, cool and sexy~ and then him wanting Changmin...Oh so hot~ ♥

The HoSu was simply adorable~ ♥♥ Pure love

And of course Yoochun was this sexy beast~ smooth... PERFECT ♥

Really a wonderful fic, the fight scenes and the weapons, everything so well done that now I want to watch some good mob asian movies...I'll look!

Congratulations on such an amazing job! :3 You should be proud! ♥

P.D--> I'll wait for that epilogue until the end of time *o*

[dreaminthepast]

0.0 Thank you so much!!!

:D Crazy Jaejoong was SO much fun to write, and his constant chasing of Min. ♥

Aw, I'm glad you loved HoSu, I don't write them very often, and Junsu always gives me trouble.

Hehe Yoochun is a smooth play-ah ♥♥

I promise not to make you wait until the end of time for the epilogue, though unfortunately it may not get done until school is over :C

[ekkusuchan]

wah! it's the end!! congrats for finishing it ^___^ i'm glad everything worked out in the end, and that ending is really the best for poor choon yei and also for yunho ^_^

[dreaminthepast]

Thank you!

I'm glad you enjoyed the ending. I agree, they'll both get to start over without any skeletons in the closet.

♥♥♥