Fic: In the Line of Fire (T)

[dreaminthepast]

Title: In the line of fire (T)
Author: Sev-chu
Pairing: Jaejoong x Changmin, Yunho x Junsu (Yunho x ofc) Yoochun x ofc(s)
Rating: R for violence and blood
Summary: Mob wars are painting the streets of Hong Kong and Japan red with blood ensnaring the rogue cop in its wake. Can Yunho find him in time to save him and is he ready for what he finds? Can the

Comments

[neoreulwonhae]

NOOOOOOO! :O

This is so dramatic, what a cliffhanger! Jaejoong, always protecting Changmin. :') ♥

I loved the way Yunho dealt with ChoonYei's betrayal. It's obviously not the best situation to be in but I think he acted like a gentleman, taking charge and saying the things he needed to say, with complete truth. “I’ve always loved you. I just can’t love you in the way you need to be loved. I’m sorry ChoonYei, I’m sorry I couldn’t give you what you deserved, but I will always protect you.” That basically sums it up. ♥

Can't wait to see what happens next!

[dreaminthepast]

It's ok, just breath!

I'm so glad Yunho's direct but gentlemanly approach worked. I'm not very good at writing drawn out angst, and I really don't like it anyway...

I'll try to be more promp with the next chapter.

Thank you so much! ♥ ♥

[dreaminthepast]

JUST BREATH!

[wordlesslove]

shit

[dreaminthepast]

AW! *hands you several tissues

[wordlesslove]

you're welcome^^V!

yeah, i defended him a bit too *sheepish*. he's so loveable that it's a little hard not to, even though it was bad.

sorry if it was unclear, (and you were right, i was ranting about the cheating, most definitely not you condoning it, you can easily see you don't *bows*), sorry for the confusion^^~

and i'm sure you can pull it off, you've done a marvelous job so far!

okay, see you later (figuratively, *laughs*)
*hugs back*!

[dreaminthepast]

I understood what you meant c: I was just trying to clarify what I was trying to say lol.

♥♥♥