Fic: In the line of fire (J)

[dreaminthepast]

Title: In the line of fire (j)
Author: Sev-chu
Pairing: Jaejoong x Changmin, Yunho x Junsu (Yunho x ofc) Yoochun x ofc(s)
Rating: Pg - Nc-17
Summary: Mob wars are painting the streets of Hong Kong and Japan red with blood ensnaring the rogue cop in its wake. Can Yunho find him in time to save him and is he ready for what he finds? Can the gangs unite

Comments

[irene014]

I hope they will find the Golden Dragon soon... I don't want Changmin and the others to get hurt and that's just not my bias speaking and the Golden Dragon ties with other gangs seems to be really strong to defeat and banish.

I have a feeling that Yunho maybe ostracize because of the sudden outburst of Donghae then Junsu.. yay~ Chunnie for being a good friend ^^

gah~ the ending is spicing up! Changmin should just already admit that Jaejoong makes him feels all horny inside and get on with the smexing ;D

[dreaminthepast]

Yes, the Golden Dragon are beginning to be a formidable opponent.

Hm, poor Yunho *pets him* hopefully he can win Junsu back!

lol, I agree. On with the smexing!

[roseltv]

Poor Yunho. I have always though undercover cop/spy is one of the cruelest jobs ever. It's very hard to always know what is right and what is wrong. Even though the supposed criminals may seem bad, they are still human beings, and once u get close, u can't help but have a real relationship with them, and it will tore u down when the people give u their trust.

Back to Jaemin. The last scene is really hot. It really....has an effect on me lol. I hope u would give us a hot scene for the next chap ^^.

[dreaminthepast]

Hm, I had never really thought of undercover work that way. You make a really good point, it would be really tough once you got to know people even if they were the 'bad guys'.

Hot Jaemin scene.... check! ^^

Glad you enjoyed this little scene ♥ Thanks!

[dreaminthepast]

LOL, take a deep breath, we're not done yet.

[dreaminthepast]

Lol, that's ok. They have a tendency to do that.

xD Thank you!

[anonymous]

Man, I am late... But better late than never I suppose

[anonymous]

P.S.- It is totally time for you to get 'carried away' again. *smiles*

[dreaminthepast]

You're not that late! I wasn't going to start fretting until tomorrow. lol

[kurogoma]

i really wonder what role donghae will play and really how did he come into his suspicions about yunho.

like another commenter had said, it can such hell to be a mole, whether on the side of the law or the bad guys. have you seen "infernal affairs"? the HK version, not the hollywood version. that was a wonderful depiction of the mental and physical anguish when one is in such a role. it is possible for one to gain and give respect and camaraderie, establish a bond of some sort irregardless if it is amongst cops or gangsters. thus the feeling of betrayal can be terrible.

update soon! :D

[dreaminthepast]

Hmmmm, you have just hit on the hundred dollar question! :D

I haven not seen that movie. Tbh I'm not a movie kind of person but it sounds interesting. I can only imagine what it's like to be in that sort of situation, the internal struggle one must go through along with the outward struggle. Then there are those feelings of betrayal.

I hope I can be able to touch on those a little. I know it won't be perfect, I think sometimes it's hard to create experiences you've never had or know you will never ever have, but I will try!

Thank's so much. Will update soon :D