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Before The Dawn (Stay With Me) - Chapter 7 (2/2)

Aug 20, 2011 21:56

Title: Before The Dawn (Stay With Me)
Author: mushnrice
Ratings: PG-13 to NC-17
Pairing(s): Woohyun/Sunggyu, Myungsoo/Sungyeol/Sungjong, Dongwoo/Hoya
Summary: A mysterious slave who hides who he really is, a rebellious master who has a secret. Thrown together and mixed, will these two people’s lives be changed when they meet each other as Master and ( Read more... )

!chaptered, !pairing:sunggyu/woohyun, !pairing:ot3, !btd (swm), !pairing:dongwoo/hoya, !fandom:infinite

Comments 38

caroselle August 20 2011, 14:10:32 UTC

this chapter was interesting. i see more of the plot filling in, and its kinda weird trying to imagine a 14 year old writing smut >.< and hey, i'm living in singapore too. :D

mushnrice August 21 2011, 13:11:22 UTC

haha, it's even more awkward when my brothers are beside me using their own computers. 8/ OH LOL! 8D inspirits in SG jjang! 8D

Thanks for the comment! <3

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mushnrice August 21 2011, 13:14:04 UTC

Haha, thank you<3 ><" i'm still mushroom tho. 8D AND MUSHROOMS CAN FLY. HAH.

Thank you for the comment! <3

lolly1588 August 20 2011, 18:13:39 UTC

wow 14 ,and you write well did not expect that .though i spot some spelling mistakes in this chapter,probably coz you were rushing to publish it

k ,back to the story ,finally they were going at it ,kinda of sudden ,but i like it
love that part "Bonded for eternity, partners for life. Not even death could separate them now."
makes the whole story more magical .
and With every chapter i really hate that "father",i hope when he dies in the story,will be some what of a horrible death x100 ,he totally deserve it .

mushnrice August 21 2011, 13:18:12 UTC

haha, yeah, ;)) like I said, my hand was cramping halfway. lol. And my brother kept looking over. XP haha, my friend was pestering me for smut. XD and the smut clicks in with the later part of the story so~ /shrugs/ 8D

Hmm~ I shall see what I can do to make him suffer. /flies to timeline and starts changing stuff/

Thanks for the comment! Really like it when people comment in detail. <3 8D

moemoe2608 August 20 2011, 19:17:35 UTC

oho~ gyu's so possessive~
the smut was DAEBAKKKK!!! A+!!!! ^^

you're just 14? seriously?
I'm older than you by 2 years............

mushnrice August 21 2011, 13:20:41 UTC

AHNYEONG UNNIE! 8DD possessive!gyu is... Scary. 8O don't really think that there's another word for him. 8PP my smut's become rusty though, I prefer my shinee smut. Xx" o well!

Thank you for the comment! <3

sr2006 August 21 2011, 02:13:38 UTC

IDEK what to comment... I guees I speechles..by your fic and your age, I'm 1 year older..LOL...wooo.. Sunggyu is the absolute demon? I love that~~ but I personally want Woohyun on the top though..^^...*waiting for next chapter~~^^

mushnrice August 21 2011, 13:22:42 UTC

My age, OTL. YAY FOR TEENAGERS. 8D kekeke~ I suppose I can sneak in woohyun topping or write another side!fic with him on top. 8)) nehh, thanks for waiting patiently as well as this comment! 8)