was it right to leave?

[musesfool]

Yesterday, I spent most of the afternoon failing to write porn (Steve Rogers, you morose bastard! There are hot ladies who'd like to have sex with you. Please stop being so melancholy. It's kind of a downer.) and then after 11 pm, while I was in the shower, I realized I wanted to write a story about John Blake. So I did:

Commencement (at AO3The

Comments

[tsuki_no_bara]

i totally agree with you about leverage - the climax was weirdly anti-climactic. and where the hell did sophie hide the stanley cup??

also sebastian stan can climb out of windows wearing only his boxer briefs ANY TIME. altho i felt bad for tj that he was only #2 on cute guy's sexception list, behind robert pattinson. and i liked that his club partners only really wanted his name. but i wanted to watch elaine and susan, not susan and bud, and i wasn't sure what the point of the flashbacks was, because i didn't really buy elaine as an oddly passive betrayed wife either. her "i'm sick of all the men in this town" speech was pretty fabulous, tho. i like the points the show occasionally makes about women in power.

[musesfool]

but i wanted to watch elaine and susan, not susan and bud

Seriously. Less Bud, more Elaine and more Nana Barrish. And more TJ in his boxers, yes, please.