Comments | musesfool: fic: Aw Yeah Tiny Bubbles! (Tiny Titans; Alfred, ensemble; g)

musesfool

fic: Aw Yeah Tiny Bubbles! (Tiny Titans; Alfred, ensemble; g)

Feb 07, 2012 21:26

Aw Yeah Tiny Bubbles!
Tiny Titans; Alfred, ensemble; g; 1,000 words
Stately Wayne Manor hosts the Annual Pet Club Valentine's Party.

Written for picfor1000. This was my prompt.

Thanks to amberlynne for handholding, to

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bruce wayne, fic: dcu, picfor1000, aw yeah tiny titans, alfred pennyworth, dick grayson

Comments 17

nrrrdy_grrrl February 8 2012, 02:32:23 UTC

It's adorable and perfect. There are some sentences in here that are as precise and effective as lovely little explosive devices. Deceptively cute, gorgeously worded.

musesfool February 8 2012, 17:09:17 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

silveronthetree February 8 2012, 03:11:25 UTC

THIS IS JUST AS ADORABLE AS I'D HOPED!!!!

You've captured Alfred's dryness and it has that Tiny Titans randomness (Beast Boy! Jason Toddler's glitter moustache!)

Given his precocity with the fairer sex, Alfred was not looking forward to his teenage years at all.

Hee! And I loved all the other shippiness - Tim & Kon and Damian & Steph.

Bruce's look of betrayal almost made Alfred feel bad, but then he breathed out another stream of bubbles and those burgeoning feelings of remorse dissipated.

This image delights me. I can picture it so clearly and it badly needs to be illustrated.

musesfool February 8 2012, 17:11:20 UTC

Thank you! And thank you for the ideas! They really helped!

Jason Toddler's glitter moustache!

Jason Toddler's glitter moustache is possibly my favorite thing I have EVER written. I imagine him showing it off with JAZZ HANDS to everyone he meets.

I can picture it so clearly and it badly needs to be illustrated.

Man, I would LOVE to get fanart for this story. It would make my YEAR. Sigh.

moetushie February 8 2012, 03:43:32 UTC

Angry little monkey is damned good way to describe Damian. This is adorable.

musesfool February 8 2012, 17:12:40 UTC

Hee! Thank you!

mousapelli February 8 2012, 04:08:15 UTC

TINY PINK BUBBLES. okay, seriously hilarious, Tiny Titans ftw.

musesfool February 8 2012, 17:14:20 UTC

AW YEAH TINY TITANS! \o/

Thank you! <3333

lonelywalker February 8 2012, 04:21:51 UTC

Damian bit him, which was only to be expected

Awww! Perfectly adorable, particularly Alfred's glaring skills.

musesfool February 8 2012, 17:15:05 UTC

Thank you!

particularly Alfred's glaring skills.

Bruce had to learn it somewhere. *g*