It's adorable and perfect. There are some sentences in here that are as precise and effective as lovely little explosive devices. Deceptively cute, gorgeously worded.
You've captured Alfred's dryness and it has that Tiny Titans randomness (Beast Boy! Jason Toddler's glitter moustache!)
Given his precocity with the fairer sex, Alfred was not looking forward to his teenage years at all.
Hee! And I loved all the other shippiness - Tim & Kon and Damian & Steph.
Bruce's look of betrayal almost made Alfred feel bad, but then he breathed out another stream of bubbles and those burgeoning feelings of remorse dissipated.
This image delights me. I can picture it so clearly and it badly needs to be illustrated.
Thank you! And thank you for the ideas! They really helped!
Jason Toddler's glitter moustache!
Jason Toddler's glitter moustache is possibly my favorite thing I have EVER written. I imagine him showing it off with JAZZ HANDS to everyone he meets.
I can picture it so clearly and it badly needs to be illustrated.
Man, I would LOVE to get fanart for this story. It would make my YEAR. Sigh.
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You've captured Alfred's dryness and it has that Tiny Titans randomness (Beast Boy! Jason Toddler's glitter moustache!)
Given his precocity with the fairer sex, Alfred was not looking forward to his teenage years at all.
Hee! And I loved all the other shippiness - Tim & Kon and Damian & Steph.
Bruce's look of betrayal almost made Alfred feel bad, but then he breathed out another stream of bubbles and those burgeoning feelings of remorse dissipated.
This image delights me. I can picture it so clearly and it badly needs to be illustrated.
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Jason Toddler's glitter moustache!
Jason Toddler's glitter moustache is possibly my favorite thing I have EVER written. I imagine him showing it off with JAZZ HANDS to everyone he meets.
I can picture it so clearly and it badly needs to be illustrated.
Man, I would LOVE to get fanart for this story. It would make my YEAR. Sigh.
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Thank you! <3333
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Awww! Perfectly adorable, particularly Alfred's glaring skills.
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particularly Alfred's glaring skills.
Bruce had to learn it somewhere. *g*
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