Comments | musesfool: fic: you and your high top sneakers and your sailor tattoos (Avengers; Steve/Darcy; adult)

musesfool

fic: you and your high top sneakers and your sailor tattoos (Avengers; Steve/Darcy; adult)

Nov 03, 2011 11:34

you and your high top sneakers and your sailor tattoos
Avengers (movieverse); Steve/Darcy; adult; 5,870 words
In which Darcy Lewis punches Captain America's v-card. Yeah, she can't believe it either.

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darcy lewis, fic: captain america, steve/darcy, steve rogers, fic: avengers movieverse

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musesfool January 28 2012, 20:48:22 UTC

Hee! thank you so much!

bats_eye November 3 2011, 20:25:00 UTC

Aww, Steve. Aww, Darcy.

This is utterly delightful. With such joy and playfulness but also the, ever present, sadness over Peggy and Bucky. It's a great illustration of why I like Steve so much, he's rare among superheroes in that he's actually a mature adult, when shitty things happen to him it saddens him but he copes with it and doesn't let his grief stop him from being a really nice bloke and good company.

musesfool January 28 2012, 20:49:16 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. And yes, Steve's maturity and ability to cope are two of the things I like best about him. He's a decent guy and he doesn't let his own troubles get in the way of that.

ghostrunner7 November 3 2011, 21:23:11 UTC

Darcy is so... Darcy, in this. She's perfect.

"I can't imagine Agent Coulson going googly-eyed."

"Well, I was exaggerating for effect," she says, squeezing his hand for emphasis. Her fingertips are cool and damp from the condensation on the glass. "Basically, he had an expression. That doesn't happen very often."

Ugh, ILOVEIT.

musesfool January 28 2012, 20:49:31 UTC

Hee! Thank you so much!

circ_bamboo November 3 2011, 22:02:15 UTC

Here via taraljc and she was absolutely correct: this story is made of awesome. :)

musesfool January 28 2012, 20:56:33 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

brynnmck November 3 2011, 23:50:20 UTC

Oh, man, this was AWESOME. I love Darcy so much, and I love the idea of her matter-of-factness meeting up with with Steve's idealism/decency. And your dialogue for her was pitch-perfect; I could hear it so clearly. (Steve's was awesome too, I just think he has less distinctive speech patterns. Or maybe it's just that I've seen Thor three times and CA only once. Hee.) Plus, unsurprisingly, the mid-coital baseball discussion made me REALLY happy. EEEEE THIS WAS GREAT.

musesfool January 28 2012, 20:59:20 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! I thought they would be a really pair to spark against each other and see what happened, and they seem to go together really well. I'm so glad you thought it sounded like them. And of course they're going to discuss baseball! It could be no other way. *g*