fic: The coefficient of the body (DCU; Steph/Dick; adult)

Sep 18, 2011 16:13

The coefficient of the body
DCU; Steph/Dick; adult; 4,150 words
Steph might regret this later, but never because of him.

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fic: dcu, stephanie brown, dick/steph, dick grayson

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sweetestdrain September 18 2011, 20:39:25 UTC
eeee, I love this. Steph deserves happy didn't-go-splat sex on rooftops always. And with Dick? Even better. (I also like how even as they're mostly focused on each other in this fic, you've subtly worked in their past history with ... everyone. Oh Batfamily, how so incestuous.)

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musesfool October 4 2011, 18:22:57 UTC
Thank you! Steph totally deserves "yay, I didn't go splat!" rooftop sex! I'm so glad it worked for you.

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failing_light September 18 2011, 21:12:22 UTC
"They're not actually for personal use," he says as he tears it open. "I give them to the working girls on the East End, tell them to insist on using them, and if anybody gives them a problem with that, to let me know."

I know this is soo far from the point of the fic, but -- ilu Dick!

I also love your Steph in this fic. You've got a really great handle on her voice and where she is personally when she's Batgirl. Every other line had me going STEPH ♥

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musesfool October 4 2011, 18:24:35 UTC
Thank you! And I'm glad you liked Dick's approach to public health and sex education. *g* When I thought about where teh condom was going to come from, I was like, "Dick totally distributes them to the working girls as part of the job."

I'm also really glad Steph felt like herself.

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silveronthetree September 18 2011, 21:35:19 UTC
So ridiculously hot. I love this and it is wonderful seeing Dick and Steph have fun togther and it reminded me just how hot Batman can be.

Also there needs to be more of Steph and Kara being BFFs because that was hilarious.

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musesfool October 4 2011, 18:24:57 UTC
Thank you so much! And thanks again for all your help with making it work better. ♥

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orlanstamos September 18 2011, 21:42:30 UTC
I LOVE THIS.

IT IS THE BEST.

I WANT ALL OF THE STEPHANIE/DICK FICS. ALL OF THEM. EACH ONE.

Can I say how awesomely you handled Steph and sex in this? I read a lot of fic where she is totally 100% okay about sex, which is, you know, a totally legit interpretation, but I loved the depth you gave her here. It would make sense that there was more at play there, and I love that she's finding herself steadier ground there too. Loved the reference to her and Tim's relationship- and I totally believe that they never had sex either.

Dick and Steph are both so HOT in this fic too, guh. The idea of them having rooftop sex while still mostly in their suits? And Dick just SWOOPING then make outs then catching bad guys! then SEX.

And I loved the inclusion of Kara! I dig their friendship.

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musesfool October 4 2011, 18:34:27 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it. I think Dick and Steph would be really hot - and mostly emotionally okay with - having a lot of sex with each other.

Can I say how awesomely you handled Steph and sex in this?

Thank you again! I feel like she probably will be as okay as anybody can be about sex in a couple of years, but she's still getting there, like a lot of 18-19 year olds, but with the added addition of her baggage about being unwanted/rejected, especially by Bruce and Tim.

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thebratqueen September 19 2011, 00:55:31 UTC
I love that he had Tic-Tacs in the utility belt, and that she called him on it.

The rest too, but it's the little details that add awesome, yanno? =)

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musesfool October 4 2011, 18:34:59 UTC
Thank you! The Tic-Tacs and the health department condoms are my favorite details, so I'm so happy you liked that. *g*

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