fic: what hands uncover (Batman:The Animated Series; Babs/Dick; pg)

Feb 20, 2011 10:42

what hands uncover
Batman: The Animated Series; Babs/Dick; pg; 1290 words
Robin and Batgirl, chasing each other, always competing as much as working together.

For the lovely and talented dotfic on her birthday. Happy Birthday! Thanks to
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fic: dcu, batman, barbara gordon, dick/babs, dick grayson

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dotfic February 20 2011, 17:01:47 UTC
YOU WROTE ME DICK/BABS!! Eeeeeeeeeee!

And it is gorgeous. Your Babs pov is so right, how she wants the mysteries to solve instead of the flowers and chocolates and how she's both so completely smitten and yet too self-aware and aware of his issues to lose herself in it, and how she's such an incredibly sane member of the batfamily who has these insights (maybe Alfred is only one saner than her). Also loved how you followed the relationship through Dick going from being Robin to Nightwing, and we get Babs' view of that, and the cinnamon gum, and how Dick gives himself completely to whoever he's with at that moment, yet he genuinely cares for her. And the making out up-against-the-wall, and removing of uniforms, the shedding literally and figuratively of those layers, and then how you landed them at finding a comfortable place with each other, an understanding.

OH MY HEART. OTP! OTP! :D

Thank you so much for writing this for me. <3

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musesfool June 15 2011, 15:09:51 UTC
Hee! I'm so glad you liked it and thought it felt true to Babs, and to Dick through her eyes. Thank you so much for the lovely comment! It really put a smile on my face. (I'm so sorry it's taken me three months to answer your comment. *hands*)

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anonymous February 20 2011, 19:11:26 UTC
Oh, this is wonderful! Love them both, and love what you did with them.

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musesfool June 15 2011, 15:01:14 UTC
Thank you so much!

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brynnmck February 20 2011, 22:37:29 UTC
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YOU WROTE DICK/BABS! OMG THIS MADE ME SO HAPPY. I, too, adore your Babs POV, and how she's just slightly prickly without being cruel, and how she and Dick learn to understand each other, borne out of their long friendship and a lot of trial and error. Plus I am really REALLY into the making out against a wall. Like, REALLY INTO IT. Hee. And gauntlets and kissing and mmmm. Also you have so many lovely Dick insights here--his willingness to perform for an audience of one, the shadows love him the same way the light does (that made me shiver). Wonderful. YAY, this made me so happy!

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musesfool June 15 2011, 15:40:59 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it! And thought that Babs felt true to herself, and also to Dick through her point of view!

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silveronthetree February 21 2011, 22:49:44 UTC
Dick and Babs! The teasing and the competition and the could-have-been-kiss was so very Batgirl and Robin. I loved the kissing against the wall and Dick using his whole body to do it ♥ and Barbara always needing to be in charge. I especially liked the first two paragraphs of 3 - you capture the aftermath of a broken relationship and the fear of an invasion of your home.

It scares her, sometimes, how easily he lets her have her way with him, fits himself into whatever image of him he thinks she wants to see

Oh Dick.

Bruce is the only other person who makes her angry enough to cry, which makes a sick sort of sense.

Oh toon!Babs :(

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musesfool June 15 2011, 15:41:32 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so happy it worked for you, and felt true to both of them!

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musesfool June 15 2011, 15:42:18 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad this worked for you. And yeah, I think they totally deserve a happy ending, but they'll never be allowed to have one. Sigh.

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