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musesfool

fic: The Burden of Perfection (Supernatural; Anna; g)

Feb 14, 2009 01:07

The Burden of Perfection
Supernatural; Anna; g; 313 words
Anna is hungry.

For silveronthetree, who wanted Anna, pie. For halfamoon.

( I ate that apple because I was hungry. / I wanted what lay outside of Paradise, / a world without the burden of perfection. )

halfamoon, fic: supernatural, anna milton, pie = love

Comments 31

embroiderama February 14 2009, 16:29:40 UTC

Mmmm, pie. I love it!

musesfool February 18 2009, 07:42:53 UTC

Thank you!

And who doesn't love PIE?

dotfic February 14 2009, 20:46:08 UTC

Lovely, and I like how she gets Castiel to go with that particular lie.

musesfool February 18 2009, 07:43:15 UTC

Thank you! And apple pie is a very convincing argument.

erinrua February 14 2009, 20:54:47 UTC

That is absolutely ... sweet. It really is. It makes me feel for Anna and all she's lost, and how all she has now are stolen moments. It's perfect that Castiel, who wakes thin edges himself, would be the one to understand her.

Plus now I'm craving pie. ;-) Beautifully done, my dear! *hugs!*

musesfool February 18 2009, 07:43:33 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

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musesfool February 18 2009, 07:43:49 UTC

Thank you!

elanurel February 15 2009, 03:47:39 UTC

This was, as always, really lovely. And I adored the fact that it was apple pie. (There was my obvious observation for the day, between the icon and the poem. ;-P )

musesfool February 18 2009, 07:44:22 UTC

Thank you so much! And of course it's apple pie! I wanted to actually work a pomegranate reference in, but it didn't work. Sigh.

elanurel February 19 2009, 04:08:27 UTC

That would have been extremely kick ass but the lack of it did not, in any way, detract from my enjoyment. I actually felt like a dork going "oh, apple pie." ;)

musesfool February 20 2009, 05:19:30 UTC

That's good to hear. And heh. I thought apple pie was an appropriate temptation for the show. *g*