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serrico May 7 2008, 06:18:12 UTC
*FLOVES*

Tony + Pepper = *gosh*, yes. And you got their flirty little dance just right, here, all borderlines and suggestions and sexy-as-hell *almosts*.

YAY. :)

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musesfool May 7 2008, 15:53:19 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it, and thought it felt like them. They were so cute in the movie!

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destro May 7 2008, 06:18:24 UTC
Oh this is gorgeous. Gorgeous and fun and a little sweet. I love them like this, flirty but always aware of the implications. And this:

"...trailing the tip of his index finger over Orion's belt, territory he'd like to explore someday, though it's never not going to be a bad idea."

*Hot*

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musesfool May 7 2008, 15:53:35 UTC
Thank you!

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bluerosefairy May 7 2008, 06:18:57 UTC
I haven't even seen the movie, but I am thoroughly charmed by this story. I can totally and completely imagine every word of it spoken by the characters, and the intimacy of Tony tracing Pepper's freckles is probably one of my few bulletproof kinks that no one had gotten to yet.

Lovely!

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musesfool May 7 2008, 15:54:40 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it, even without having seen the movie yet. They're adorable together in it, and yeah, the tracing freckles thing is a personal favorite of mine. *G*

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svilleficrecs May 7 2008, 06:35:40 UTC
*bites knuckle* YES THAT! :) I am very glad to be responsible for this! :) *flail* They totally go on like this FOREVER don't they? How is this G? It certainly doesn't feel G. But I bet they're all G rated hot for years on end w/ each other.

"leaves no ring of lipstick around the glass. Shame, that."

Sigh. There have totally been other nights where Tony enjoys the fact that Pepper has left lipstick on the glass, haven't there?

I'm curious, in your mind, is this pre-events of the movie Tony or post events of the movie Tony?

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musesfool May 7 2008, 16:03:00 UTC
Thank you so much! And they totally do, while everyone around them is either like, "Would you two just do it already!?" or completely oblivious, or they think poor Pepper is just delusional.

There have totally been other nights where Tony enjoys the fact that Pepper has left lipstick on the glass, haven't there?

Oh yes.

I'm curious, in your mind, is this pre-events of the movie Tony or post events of the movie Tony?

Post to me, mostly because I always tend to write forward, and also because I think he probably becomes more mindful of how he flirts with her, after he's come back? That it could end up being hurtful if they don't both watch out, because they've already crossed a number of lines. Hmm...

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heidi8 May 7 2008, 08:58:00 UTC
Awwww.

Lovely and perfectly in synch with the film!

(Is there an IM fic/fan-stuff comm yet?)

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schmevil May 7 2008, 09:47:55 UTC
starkindustries is a fic/art/talk comm for comics and movieverse. There isn't enough of one verse to overwhelm the other.

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musesfool May 7 2008, 16:09:45 UTC
Good to know. Thanks.

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schmevil May 7 2008, 20:39:57 UTC
NP. Pass the word along. :)

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