Title: The Hush of Waiting
Author: victoria p. [victoria @ unfitforsociety.net]
Summary: He wants to make this moment last, and he wants to remember it forever.
Rating: Adult
Disclaimer: All your characters are belong to Rowling.
Feedback: Makes my day
Notes: Thanks to
devildoll and
mousapelli for whipping it into shape, and to
angelgazing for listening to me wibble. Written
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He wonders if Remus even misses them.
This is just amazing. I think that it is one of the best things I have read by you in a while. That part is probably the part that hurts the most to read, but is so true which makes it my favorite. The descriptions are amazing and even though it is over 5K, it doesn't seem long at all. This is definitely a favorite and I will be sure to reread it many times. Lovely. :]
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Burn 12GP!
I love the weather, and the bed under the window, and the snow. And Sirius sneaking out, and Remus letting him in the end. And when the get back together over port. Yay!
agreeing to act like it doesn't hurt until it actually doesn't. I did like this, the recognition that it will be, or at least could be, actually okay.
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Burn 12GP!
You know I'm all for that. *g*
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He shakes his head, pushes a hand through his hair. "Christ, you're a bastard."Because Remus channels Wilson there, and for some reason I knew you had to be behind it. Those two are my favorites in their canons, and this moment proved how similar they can be when trying to deal with the objects of their affection (Sirius and House, I mean). If you didn't do it on purpose I hope you don't consider this as pointing out a weakness in the characterization because it works very well, and didn't detract from ( ... )
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Because Remus channels Wilson there, and for some reason I knew you had to be behind it.
Heh. You're right. I totally never even thought about it, but you're right, and they are rather similar, aren't they? Men who are very good at the social niceties, who other people think are nice and nondescript and yet who clearly have more going on underneath that surface. And of course, the relationship with the brilliant, flamboyant narcissist. *g*
Thanks again for the lovely comment. I really appreciate it.
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Undoubtedly my favorite line in the piece, because it is the best and simplest description of the house I have ever read.
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