Supernatural - Serious JuJu - Part One

[muses_consume]

Who: Sam and Dean Winchester - "Supernatural"
What: The Winchester brothers go to New Orleans, LA to uncover the mysterious disappearances of people only to discover that voodoo has something to do with it.

Comments

[theonecalledl]

I thought it was good. Keep going. :O Dunno if you wanted any proof-reading-thingy-things, but I found these two:

First paragraph, forth sentence: "still smell the distant stench of liquor still"

Seventh paragraph, first sentence: "bounce off the computer on onto the onlookers faces"

[muses_consume]

Yeah, proof reading is good! Thank you for finding those errors! I'll make the changes.