Fic: Three's A Crowd [ 2/? ]

[museme87]

Title: Three's A Crowd
Author: museme87
Pairing(s): Brian/Justin, Ben/Michael, Mel/Lindsay, Ted/Blake, Deb/Carl
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Over the course of his and Justin's seven year non-relationship, Brian had never been one to say no to a third party addition. But when the addition is far more permanent and redefines playroom for the worst, Brian thinks

Comments

[rainbow1907]

Wow, that was another wonderful chapter! I love your story very much, thank you! Rena :)

[museme87]

Thanks, Rena! Glad you enjoyed. :)

[moonbrightnites]

Oh, boy -- I am SO happy to see an update of this tonight I can't even tell you! ♥ I should have started cooking an hour ago but instead I happily settled down to read. Dinner can wait!

I'm completely in love with the way you write Brian and Justin, capturing them perfectly in both their strength and their vulnerability. Aged-up Justin is more confident and more certain of himself, but he still needs Brian in order to complete his life. And Brian -- he's never going to be over Justin, ever. Not even with a kid gumming up the works.

Loved the part with Debbie, too. God, she frustrates me, always certain that it's Brian who is going to hurt Justin, even at this late hour. But that's Debbie and you capture her cannon-self perfectly with both her good and annoying attributes. And of course, Brian understands and forgives.

My favorite line: "Everything else but he and Justin and the love that they share can all be chalked up to time-boyfriends, tricks, kids, all of it. And here they stand."Already 2K words into the next installment?

[museme87]

Thank you for all the lovely feedback, Michelle! It makes my day. :) Though I should apologize for dinner delays.

Deb definitely means well, but sometimes misses the mark. I think that, while she loves Brian, she understands that he's caused a lot of hurt. Sometimes that makes it difficult to side with him. Plus, I'm convinced that she'll always see Justin is that seventeen year old that showed up at the diner with Michael.

[ramie_k]

I am loving this story! So heartbreaking, but so good. Can't wait for more!

[museme87]

Thank you! Hopefully Ch3 will be along shortly. :)

[koalared]

This story is so good. Loving yet sad. I want to know Justin's story.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

[museme87]

Thanks! Justin's story will slowly trickle out. Look for more info on what happened between BJ in the next chapter. It'll give some insight into what's going on with Justin. :)

[liebedance]

I love the way you write Deb. OMIGOD. Really, H, her voice is just perfect. I can hear her saying everything. :D

[museme87]

Thanks, babes! I secretly love writing her because she doesn't hold anything back and tells it like it is. <3