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museme87

Fic: Three's A Crowd [9]

May 10, 2012 15:49

Title: Three's A Crowd
Author: museme87
Pairing(s): Brian/Justin, Ben/Michael, Mel/Lindsay, Ted/Blake, Deb/Carl
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Over the course of his and Justin's seven year non-relationship, Brian had never been one to say no to a third party addition. But when the addition is far more permanent and redefines playroom for the worst, Brian thinks ( Read more... )

verse:three's a crowd, fic:2012, pairing:brian/justin, fanfic:qaf

Comments 79

itzy68 May 10 2012, 23:55:09 UTC

Great chapter even if Brian is a coward ;)

museme87 May 11 2012, 00:34:16 UTC

Well, coward may be a bit harsh, but he lacked a shining moment in this chapter, definitely. Thanks for reading.

moonbrightnites May 11 2012, 00:55:54 UTC

I'm glad to see another chapter of this story.

I'm in the tiny minority of this fandom -- I actually don't mind Brian/other and I liked Trevor. I didn't mind their scenes together at all. Well, I wasn't crazy about them going at it while Justin was in the shower... but I can't say I was shocked.

"About?" Brian asks, looking at him as if he suggested having a four-way with a pair of dykes. -- hee.

"Yes, we are. I'm not asking for much, but at least tell me that you're not running off like you did the last time, telling everyone that you went to Madrid or something while you had a ball removed." -- I think I missed something important. How did Trevor find out about that? I thought Brian kept his medical history a secret?

And Trevor fucking redefines passive-aggressive. -- I guess I disagree with Mr. Kinney there because I didn't think Trevor was being passive-aggressive at all with his forthright questions about WTF, lover-boy.

Aww, my poor Justin.

museme87 May 11 2012, 01:14:41 UTC

Thanks, M! <3

You didn't miss anything important concerning Trevor finding out about Brian's illness. It was just one of those things that happened in their past that I didn't reveal much about just established. If you're curious, I imagine it happened quite a bit like it did with Justin. Not with a phone call, but Trevor hearing about something in passing, probably from Brian's secretary or something. Maybe he'd approached her about making plans with Brian in December and she'd mentioned something about his appointment with Dr. so-and-so, assuming that Brian had told Trevor. That's the rough back story on that one. :)

As for the passive-aggressive behavior, I guess I worded that poorly, lol. What I meant to imply is that Trevor has the ability to be passive-aggressive in ways that redefine the word, not that he was being passive-aggressive in that moment.

Justin deserves all the love right now, poor thing. Brian'll make it better in time, I'm sure. :)

moonbrightnites May 11 2012, 02:56:54 UTC

Thanks for clarifying on both counts.

What I meant to imply is that Trevor has the ability to be passive-aggressive in ways that redefine the word, not that he was being passive-aggressive in that moment.

Ah! Okay, that makes sense. :)

museme87 May 11 2012, 03:06:06 UTC

No problem, hon! :)

pet0511 May 11 2012, 01:55:18 UTC

New chap! I read it, the previous one first, and then the comments as far as they are already here. Basically all is said, so I try to make it short ( ... )

museme87 May 11 2012, 02:10:23 UTC

Pet! <3 Thanks for reading! And I'm very happy to hear that you like Trevor. There's a reason why he's happy with what he's had with Brian over the past two years and wants nothing more, but that's a plot detail that will be revealed later on, I think.

And as for Brian's confusion over what's setting Justin off, I have to sympathize with him a bit. There's a lot that Justin could be pissed about, lol! If Justin's pissed about the barebacking thing and Brian starts talking about kissing Trevor, Brian will be in even more trouble! You'll have to wait until next chapter to figure out what got under Justin's skin the most. It might be something you're not even expecting ( ... )

pet0511 May 11 2012, 02:19:06 UTC

Lol, certainly not cruel but a teaser! Something I'm not expecting? That's intolerable, :-). But you know that I'll wait....

museme87 May 11 2012, 02:30:28 UTC

Hahaha, well who knows! Maybe you are expecting it. But I'll say that it could be something that wasn't explicitly stated in this chapter. :) There's some subtleties to the issue.

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flequillitos May 11 2012, 02:48:29 UTC

I can understand Justin, when he left he was the only one who got the full package and now it seems andother one did it too (although we know all the true) so he is jealous and insecure, it's not the same to think in a hypothetial way that face the reality

great chapter, I don't want to like Trevor but I do, come on, make him do something stupid so I can hate him lol

now I want to know what is Brian gonna do because I think Justin is just a second away to taking his urchin and going back to pitss

thank you!!! I'm really loving this story

museme87 May 11 2012, 03:13:53 UTC

Thank you so much, dear! You're very right about a lot of things! I'm impressed. :)

I'm sad to report that I don't have any stupid moves planned for Trevor, so you may have to suffer through liking him, lol. Forgive me?

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museme87 May 11 2012, 03:18:00 UTC

Thank you! Your comment makes me very happy because I was stressing over getting Brian/Trevor right in this chapter. I wanted him to be very likable and for their relationship to work for the readers. :)

I'll tell you that Trevor was being genuine about his feelings for Brian. He loves Brian as a friend, of course, and enjoys their arrangement. But, he's not interested in a romantic relationship with Brian. There's a reason for that, but that will come in time!