Comments | museme87: Fic: Bump In The Night [Three's A Crowd 'verse]

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Fic: Bump In The Night [Three's A Crowd 'verse]

Mar 23, 2012 13:42

Title: Bump In The Night
Author: museme87
Pairing: Brian/Justin
Rating: R
Wordcount: 1,944
Warnings: strong language
Summary: The problem with monsters is that there's always two kinds-ones that sleep under your childhood bed and others that linger with you forever.
Author's Note: Written for pet0511 as a little gift fic. Sadly, dear, I wasn't able to fill your ( Read more... )

verse:three's a crowd, fic:2012, pairing:brian/justin, fanfic:qaf

Comments 58

lazy_8s March 23 2012, 18:16:38 UTC

This is made of all kinds of awesome! I loved Elise, as she is the embodiment of both Justin and Brian, just full of herself. LOL Loved the ending scene, in which she got to sleep with daddies. :)

museme87 March 23 2012, 22:57:21 UTC

Thanks, sweetie! :) Elise is, admittedly, very fun to write for that very reason.

Marcina (qafandgleeandlgbt) anonymous March 23 2012, 18:25:45 UTC

Perfect fic is perfect. It's adorable, lovely, and just overall amazing <3<3<3

Re: Marcina (qafandgleeandlgbt) museme87 March 23 2012, 22:57:56 UTC

Thanks again, Marcina!

soitg0es March 23 2012, 18:35:10 UTC

Domesticity at its best. The ending was priceless!

museme87 March 23 2012, 22:58:21 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it. :)

moonshinekinney March 23 2012, 18:39:29 UTC

Oh gosh, you know how much I love Elise! And almost just as much brain/Elise interaction!

This was perfect and fluffy and just made me smile all the time!

museme87 March 23 2012, 22:59:32 UTC

Well, darlin', I'm glad that I could make you smile!

pet0511 March 23 2012, 18:58:00 UTC

I just went to my friends page and looked over the posts and saw your name and grinned...until I saw my name and I really read once, twice, three times to get it. You did write a fic for me? I haven't read it yet, just had to come here and ask again: for ME??????? OMG, a special urchin-moment for me??? Jesses, what can I say to that? It's so incredible and I thank you so so so much! What a gift! Wowowow!

And now I have to read it, LOL. Later......

pet0511 March 23 2012, 19:41:56 UTC

OMG, that's heartwarming and a bit heartbreaking but it's just so good. I love every line. The urchin is just too fucking good (if she can swear and use bad words, I can do it too, right?). I mean, we all remember about nights like this, waking up and being afraid. And went to our parents. But Brian, clearly established as the fun daddy, though: that's not all he is. The way you tell his struggle, his fears to fuck up, his hope to make it alright somehow, never losing his fears in the process, that makes the ficlet so fantastic. Justin helping him without instructing, giving him the room to do and decide on his own in this field which makes Brian so insecure and probably ever will....I can't tell how much I can see that and how much just this defines the real bond between Brian and Justin in this post post 513 world. And I love how this little cute urchin kinda "leads" BJ through their grown up life and shows us indirectly how much they are still BJ but in a new, more secure way. Again, you made the urchin like a mirror in which we ( ... )

museme87 March 23 2012, 23:03:24 UTC

Of course I wrote a fic for you! Haha, why would you think that I wouldn't? I'm just sorry that there was a delay in answering your request for an Elise ficlet. That, and I wasn't able to make it about an argument BJ have. This is basically the complete opposite of what you asked from me last month. I feel so bad! Still, I'm glad you really enjoyed it, Pet. <3

Brian's definitely more than the fun daddy. She gets away with a lot more with Brian than Justin, but Brian definitely doesn't spoil her, lol. I think you said it perfectly when you described it as "secure" because that's really where they're at right now. I'd even call it quiet. I mean, a quiet life for Brian and Justin is still a crazy life, lol. But much tamer than their series life.