Supernatural - Whatever You Do, Don't Look Behind You (2/4) - Gen, Sam/Ava

Jun 04, 2007 20:44

Title: Whatever You Do, Don’t Look Behind You (2/4)
Author: Tonya (_fullofgrace)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Gen with Sam/Ava background
Disclaimer: The usuals. No own, no sue.
Timeline: obviously AU considering the finale; takes place in the universe created in my fic “Headlights on Dark Roads” but reading that beforehand is not a necessity ( Read more... )

gen, sam/ava, supernatural

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anonymous June 5 2007, 02:13:36 UTC
Good story so far.Update soon.I agree with Ava about funeral homes.I was just at a funeral last week and I tried to stay as far away from the body as I could.If I was near,I couldn't stop looking and it was weird.Plus the place was freezing.Dead people creep me out.(The good news was that I got to see my dad's side of the family, and we hardly ever get to see each other. There are literally at least 60 of us.)I loved Ava commenting about the brothers being so in tune with each other.

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_fullofgrace June 5 2007, 09:20:48 UTC
Thank you for the feedback! I wanted Ava to have a "normal" phobia and that seemed to work for the story. Thanks again for reading! :)

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connery_is_bond June 5 2007, 03:01:32 UTC
“And yours is decaf so don’t look so giddy,” Dean said, taking another careful sip from his own cup.

Best line ever!

Oh my god you don't understand how crazy I was going waiting on an update for this fic. As always you write the three of them wonderfully- with distinct differences between the interaction between Dean and Sam and that of Sam and Ava and of Ava and Dean. Plus the interaction between all three of them together is like gold; perfect.

If I could request thought- more Sam/Ava please, especially after the finale I could more Sam/Ava. This fic (along with your last fic) are my favorite pieces of writing out there.

I was sick all weekend and I must have dragged myself to my laptop every hour to check if you had updated. Though it was well worth the wait I must beg you to please please post the next part much much sooner since I will not survive this long again.

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_fullofgrace June 5 2007, 09:23:22 UTC
I thought about you when I posted this. lol Now that work has slowed down a bit, I should have these chapters up quicker if the muse continues on the roll she's on.

And don't worry, the next chapter is gonna have some Sam/Avaness. It's hard writing a gen story with shippy undertones.

I'm glad to hear all the dynamics are working well. I didn't realize what a task I was taking on when I started this, but nonetheless it's fun.

Thanks again for taking the time to leave feedback! It feeds my habit. :)

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tibby_thumper June 5 2007, 13:39:26 UTC
Cannot wait for the next part, we need some good Ava vibes after the finale heehee.
Please update soon =] *giggles* seemed like ages ago since the last one =[
I totally loved the way she fits in with their life and how she gets involved with the job. Although some Sam/Ava mushyness would be like...so cute!
Loved it all, its like..addictive!

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_fullofgrace June 13 2007, 03:22:29 UTC
Thanks so much for the feedback and sticking by this fic between the long break! I hope to have the next chapter up some time this weekend. And don't worry Sam/Ava is coming. Thanks again!

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_fullofgrace June 13 2007, 03:23:47 UTC
Oh noes. Ava is gonna have to be bait, isn't she?

*looks shifty*

We will wait and see. *nods*

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sky_wanderer June 5 2007, 16:31:54 UTC
Yay, a new chapter! I've needed this does of Ava love since the finale. I love how she and Dean are bugging the heck out of each other. I'm looking forward to more soon, hopefully with some Sam/Ava fluff? ^_~

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_fullofgrace June 13 2007, 03:25:20 UTC
Thank you for the feedback! It feeds the muse! :) Writing the Sam/Ava/Dean relationship has proven to be more fun than I even thought it would be. :) Thanks again for reading! The next chapter will hopefully be up this weekend.

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