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[easternfish]

@Rakuen Yodan
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➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

{ I'm just starting up again after a while away from role-playing and Super Junior too which is partly why I'm posting here! Haha. ^^ Please feel free to say anything. I will be sure to take it all in stride.

[woon]

I was a little worried when Donghae claimed because Jongwoon has gone through a lot of Hae's and they never seem to stick around very long or Jongwoon ends up having an issue with them. But I really love your Donghae! ♥ The Super Junior group has a few members who have been at RY for a long time and then it feels like others join and then quickly leave and we're left with the same ones again and I know it can be hard to show up and merge into a new group of muses that were there before you but Donghae has really been mingling well and I really want him to stick around

[ahjumma]

I really enjoy your Donghae - he's easy to keep conversations with and he's very easygoing. It's a treat when Taeyeon can hang out with him and I hope he sticks around for a long time. Like the person above mentioned, we've gone through a few already. That goes for soshi members too, but I won't bother you with that, hehe.

Anyway, I feel like you have a nice grasp on Donghae and think his personality and behaviour makes it very simple for Taeyeon and him to be on the same level.