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Rules:
➥This is a place for critique, not for hateful flaming, so that will not be tolerated.

➥We know how immense one's love for a muse may be, and we have nothing against you displaying it here. But keep in mind this is a place for critique, so trying to offer some actual criticism is still encouraged, not to

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[musefied]

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@ NAME OF THE COMMUNITY
musefied + musefied

@ homeless / psl
musefied + musefied

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

[vocalring]

Should make the most out of this since someone took the time to make it, right?

@ CLUBHOUSED
vocalring

@ homeless / psl
praeclaruslux

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

I didn't mind the "harsh criticism" thing that was up earlier, but if you could also make your comments constructive, then that would be great too. Especially for vocalring who I've been working on for a while, but I still feel is off by where he should really be. Need other perspectives.. If anyone has played with him long enough, please don't hold back on anything that could help me develop him better.

[vocalring]

My muse hasn't yet had a chance talk to vocalring in depth or scene so I won't be able to offer you much by the way of useful crit. :/ But from what I know of MBLAQ and what I've seen of him around clubhoused, he seems pretty spot-on characterization wise. He sounds right, if that makes any sense. This is only my impression of him at a glance.

[cityspeed]

@amaibasil
cityspeed

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)

➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)

➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

((I usually write a long, unnecessary spiel here but I really shouldn't be on the computer so I'm just gonna scurry off, haha. As always, feel free to PM me anytime if you need to say something! I won't get offended if you give me crit, even if I didn't ask for it. Promise! *runs off to dentist*))

[cityspeed]

((Haha, it's all good! I'm glad he's coming off as properly weird. xD A lot of what he says I take from things the real has actually said, and he is... a bizarre little creature. orz Sometimes when he says something stupid or weird I want to tell people 'I SWEAR IT'S ON PURPOSE AND I'M NOT JUST A WEIRDO'. XDD But he has a lot of fun talking to Nana! I know absolutely nothing about Kpop but she's super cute and sweet. And it makes him laugh how shocked she is about so much stuff that's just natural to him. xD And she handles his pervy creepiness pretty well too, which is always a plus! 8D I'm definitely looking forward to scening with you~ hopefully today, if we're lucky! ^^ I'm really glad they've started talking though, and I hope she doesn't stop either! XD She always really seems like she's participating in the conversation, not just kind of smiling and nodding, which is nice. He would be very pleased to know someone actually finds him manly despite how un-manly he can be

[outofroman]

@ CLUBHOUSED
lovethismoment + tonightsheaven

@ homeless / psl
foreverlasts + plaidcharm

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

Be as harsh as you like but please keep it constructive.

[realmighty]

@ avant_color
realmighty

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)