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[shutdowns]

@cloudapp
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➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

it's been awhile since i've taken him out of the woodwork again, but i've really enjoyed playing him this time around so if there's anything that you think i need to work on to help improve your experience playing with him, let me know please!

[steady]

Ugh, Jonghyun. I actually love your Jonghyun. I'm really glad that he and Kyungsoo are talking more because it's always fun to talk to your muse. I hope that Kyungsoo can be someone that Jonghyun can talk to about personal things, too. Maybe. I can't promise anything in return with this guy haha! But they're silly together and it's really so much fun that I feel like you should know. I don't want to say that I ~know~ the real very well but I was quite a big Shinee fan in the past and from what I've seen then your Jonghyun is great. The real is someone I kind of admire IRL because he's outspoken and stands his ground and I think that your muse is also like that. From what we've seen anyway~

I have nothing to say about your writing because we haven't scened yet~ We will have to change that! ♥ Keep playing this kid~ he's pretty cool.

[shutdowns]

thank you!! ;; i'm really glad that they're talking a lot now as well. at first, i was so nervous and scared about throwing him in and letting him be social despite the fact that being social is part of who jonghyun is. but i'm glad that i've gotten over that fear and he's all over the place now and kyungsoo got to be one of his victims or is it the other way around? haha their interactions are definitely some of my favorite because of how ridiculous they get, but it's pretty adorable that in all of it they seem to really adore eachother which i think is something true with the reals! as for buckling down and having heart to hearts, jonghyun hasn't bad many of those yet but i think with time and further growth of their relationship that he eventually will and hopefully kyungsoo will too! as for being outspoken and standing his ground, i like to think i've etched a lot of that into this kid so thank you for seeing it in him! ;;

we'll get to scene at some point! we'll make it happen!

[91liner]

hello ^^ I will start this off by apologizing for my muse being so absent towards the end of our stay at cloudapp. it was a difficult time for us and I seriously should have just dropped instead of dragging it on

[shutdowns]

you don't have to apologize! you tried to stay around and your efforts in that was good enough

[memento]

I considered writing this anon but I think it might've been obvious it was from me so I'll just do it openly lol. When Jonghyun first claimed at CA I was pretty excited to have one around for Taemin but I I have to echo 91line mun and say that I found his presence to be very underwhelming if not nonexistent at the time, it was like pulling teeth and getting no response at all. That being said I do see how you responded to that and I can't really complain much because I know what it's like to feel uneasy about a muses voice/footing, and now that Taemin has been around a tiny bit more I do see that he's trying to reach out and I'm happy for that change

[shutdowns]

thank you for this honestly! it's nice to be told what's wrong and how to fix it

[memento]

I think there has been some changes since I've noticed a few of these things so I'm glad you're progressing and becoming more serious with him! It's true he does enjoy some SM and other idol releases. I know it does take a long time to become comfortable with a reals quirks and facts, so I was trying to make sure it didn't seem like I was attacking or anything haha. It's all understandable.

[imyoonie]

Jonghyun has been really great so far. ): He is so chatty and bubbly and I think that works well for him. It's not an overly cuteness or aegyo or anything, but he is energetic, fun and easy to talk to. I don't know the real super well but from what we have experienced, he fits from our perspective! ^^ I hope our muses get the chance to talk more and I mostly wanted to encourage you to keep him around. ♥

[shutdowns]

thank you! i'm glad that you like him! i'm sorry it took so long before he eventually reached out to her, but if you check my replies to the comments above then you'll see why. from the interactions that he and yoona have had so far, they're really cute and the bounce off each other very nicely so i hope that they get to talk more as well and develop their friendship further. sometimes i forget to check his buddylist, so if you ever see him online do not be afraid to ping him! although, at times i might be on my phone so his responses will come a lot slower at those times! and thank you again!!

[imyoonie]

I had to go read them lol. Taemin mun is so legit! xD See, I don't know Shinee well enough to have those specific examples, so I think it's great to get that too. I was going to say that our "surface" impression of him was really positive, because again I don't know him that deeply.

I 100% understand this feeling you were having. This Yoona was my very first non-au muse and she has been around for several years now. But at the same time, she has been so up and down and I've been really unsure and timid at times, regardless of how long I've had her or how long I've liked SNSD. I've experienced times where I felt really discouraged and unsure about her and I've had irl issues that kept me from playing well, and even though I know she is always very friendly and playful, it was hard for me to reach out like that. I'm glad you've pulled through and are working on him more. ♥ We will try to poke him more on aim as well~

[shutdowns]

the little things like peach crush cocktails are important, but right now as i'm reshuffling through six years of information i think at this point it's more important that i get down his general personality. so i'm more fussed about how he'll react to situations and respond to people honestly. so if the surface was comparable then that's a start for us as well

[memento]

Too legit to quit~