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➥This is a place for critique, not for hateful flaming, so that will not be tolerated.

➥We know how immense one's love for a muse may be, and we have nothing against you displaying it here. But keep in mind this is a place for critique, so trying to offer some actual criticism is still encouraged, not to

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@ NAME OF THE COMMUNITY
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@ homeless / psl
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➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

[strongtone]

@ thestreetcart
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➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

[strongtone]

i don't have much crit to offer so i feel silly to say this, but minho is pleasant to talk to, and his comments around the community are fun to read. ;; especially with the rest of shinee. i hope we get to see him more, since he sounds really fun to be around!

[hoyawon]

@ homeless / psl
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➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

if you've scened with me and want to critique writing, that's cool - i just left it out because there's only a few who fit that category. be as honest as you want, just don't be unnecessarily rude pls. i'm still finding his voice so any helpful advice is more than welcome.

[hoyawon]

alright so this is semi-creep of me but i'm sorry? maybe? anyways, so i love hoya and i love your hoya even more. i've seen him commenting around and posting at citysouls, and just love the way he interacts with everyone. everything he says just seems so inherently hoya that i get caught off guard sometimes because he's hilarious the way he is and how he talks. i've interacted with him as well, and we love what we've seen from him so far and i should probably get back to that cute ooc message you sent me! and i will. i'm also pretty new/old to the fandom so let's work together, okay? ;; idk, this sounds dumb now. anyways! i think we'll definitely get a better feel for your hoya once we get scening or something once i get an sn set up for my guy...uh, yeah. i love your hoya, the end. ):

[hoyawon]

semi-creep is me all the way so i'm totally okay with this, sob. but thank you so much for this comment, it really means a lot - especially because of everything i said in said ooc message ahaha ;-;! we're both really excited for you and your guy to get that sn because the interactions were just so, so fun gksj. i totally love your guy too ;-; like a creepy lot lmao!!

[gyuyomi]

So we just had that one post and just a very short interaction, but I think you're off to a good start with Hoya! I look forward to seeing where you take him. ^^

[gyuyomi]

@ kakotalk
gyuyomi

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

If you'd prefer giving crit privately, you can comment here or send me a PM. Thanks~

[gyuyomi]

so i haven't signed onto the sn we've been scening on because i've been busy with school and the like, but i wanted to give you some critique/mostly praise/probably not even crit because i'm not good at it. BUT! your writing style is something i really enjoyed in the one scene we've done/are doing? it's very fluid and easy to reply to. i can visualize everything so clearly and i love that. as for your characterization of sunggyu...i don't claim to be all-knowing about infinite or anything but i know some? enough to know that i love love love your interpretation of the real? ): idk but i enjoy him a lot and maybe one day a muse of mine can run into him! even if he's a little introvert as you've pointed out loL~ that's okay, though, because i enjoyed this one scene of ours enough and i'll try and not be greedy. \; but yeah, that's it! not much crit because i don't really have anything bad to say...

[gyuyomi]

He's an utter loser and kind of a jerk with an ego, but I'm so glad you like him! Your writing is lovely too, and easy to write back against, so that definitely has a lot to do with it. ♥ I'd love to write more with you too, so let's see how it goes~

I'm sorry because I haven't been able to tag you back yet like I promised... School is really slamming me here too. ;; But I don't intend on dropping it, so we can take it slow, right?

[gyuyomi]

he seems like it haha. <3 i just love how real and rough around the edges he seems? he also seems like he'd be a fun muse to run into/interact with in general. idk but thank you! i would really love to write against you more so i look forward to seeing where this takes us!

and that's okay, haha. i didn't even realise honestly! the semester's winding down so it's completely understandable. yes! taking it slow sounds good to me. ;;

[91liner]

@ hompy
91liner

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