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@ hitshuffle
aureateglow

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[selca]

We haven't had the opportunity to scene with you just yet, unfortunately, but I just wanted to let you know how amazing I think your Jiyoung is! She has every characteristic that I see in the real and she just has this overall sense of genuineness that I adore. One thing that I'd definitely like to see more of is her playful sort of prankster side which we've seen in small doses here and there. That's definitely a favorite! I am rambling but I've been waiting for the opportunity to spazz to you about this cutie. I hope she and Seungyeon can bond soon! I'm looking forward to it! (Also, thank you for putting up with our craziness in the blast. Hehe!)

[aureateglow]

Ah, thank you ;; I'll try to keep that aspect of her in mind! Lately I think I've been at a risk of making her grow up too fast, so thank you for reminding me about that! I'm excited for the day when we'll get to scene too! And don't worry, you girls are hilarious to watch HAHA ♥

[selca]

I don't think it's too much of a stretch! The real has really grown and matured lately, it's kind of ridiculously endearing. ;; I coo a little every time I see her because she's so gdrtfbjfd!! I remember she used to annoy me a bit because she seemed so bratty, but I think it's because I always forgot just how young she was. And still is! But lately she's mellowed out, though, somehow managing to keep that little bit of maknaeness, it's too adorable. I think you're doing a great job. ♥

Jump in some more! You're hilarious too, hehe! :3

[ext_1580620]

@ idolfactory
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nervous, please don't be too harsh u__u

[ext_1580620]

A slightly awkward question, but is English your first language? Sometimes your grammar and syntax are slightly awkward, and it makes him sound a little...weird.

[ext_1580620]

It actually is, I'm not always aware of doing that but one of the reasons why he sometimes sounds like that is because when I'm tired it really gets to my brain and it doesn't function properly. I hope it's not making him sound stupid or anything, I'll try to keep an eye on that.

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See, even in this response your first sentence seem to run on awkwardly. Maybe try using more commas?

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@ hitshuffle
gguk

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[pinkbabycows]

(( There. Icon 8| And I don't remember what I wrote last time so whatever I'm sure you don't mind getting the same praise, twice ;D ;D

[retrospection]

(( Still sad I couldn't get the other one around 40kb! Anyway.. It seems like I'm still in braindead mode as well and all I can say is thank you, this means a lot. ;; I really, really love the chemistry between our muses and ugh. ♥

[starlightsprite]

Your Yongguk is lovely ;~: I really really like him. Honestly I have no crit for him. He is silly, he is kind of quiet and shy at times, he has his extrovert side which you see every now and then. But he also has his badass man side that makes us laugh really. Pervert. We really look forward to scening with him more and talking to him more because he is pretty damn awesome ;; Keep up the good work okay! ♥

[wu]

@ ringback
taller

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Since he's been reaching out a lot more lately, I guess it's this time again.

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these are just a few things i have come to notice, and it might just be me who feels bothered by it~
sometimes it feels like you aren't very enthusiastic about continuing a conversation on aim or livejournal, and when we talk on aim it's like i have to keep you awake by sending you ims, even if you could have replied to the previous one - which from time to time makes it feel like i'm talking to myself. also sometimes it feels like my muse is being taken for granted and it's like you expect them to reach out first. ^^'

other than that we adore him! personality wise he's really good, and other than what i said above we really enjoy talking to him. :) hopefully we'll be able to scene one of these days!