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➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
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[majissuka]

This is probably going to just be a random shout out, but~ Yuichi really likes playing with Erika! He's awkward and most of the time doesn't know what to say to her, but he feels like she is genuinely one of the people he can count on as one of his close friends. I hope they can continue to get closer ♥ I'm not too familiar with the real, but Erika really feels alive and multi-sided to me

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I'm really glad that he feels that way about her, because she counts him as one of her close friends as well. And I'm definitely hoping they will get closer. I don't see why it won't happen! ♥

It was a whole lot of fun. I super enjoyed that scene as well. I think we missed each other a lot because that was around the time I was moving. We can always continue a scene whenever or we can talk it out if it ends up taking awhile before we meet back up with our schedules. I'm super flexible! We'll definitely write together again. Erika is determined about taking him out.

I agree that was weird. And after it happened I thought that was weird. But I'm glad you pointed it out. There were a couple of other contributing factors to her being like that, but I do need to tone it down some. I completely agree. And thank you for pointing that out and confirming it for me. ♥ I'll be working on it for the future.

Erika and I enjoy Yuichi and definitely looking forward to more of these two as well! ♥

[majissuka]

He actually had a little crush on her...haha! But he's worked all that out now. But he most definitely would like to be good friends!

It was also during my finals, actually! It was just a bad time for both of us! But I hope I can be better about keeping this guy active in the future. Sometimes he kind of falls off the radar. With awesome people like Erika around, though, I'm sure it will be easier!

Okay whew! I didn't want to step on any toes, it was just something I noticed! ♥ I'm glad it ended up being useful to you!