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moodmaking July 5 2012, 12:14:01 UTC
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➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

I've only scened with a few people, so I find that one irrelevant right now. Hoping that now with her being in an active home again, I can continue to improve her and let her grow. ^^

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reclothed July 5 2012, 14:39:02 UTC
Your muse interacted with a few of mine, even if only briefly, but all of them really enjoyed her! She seems as bright and gfhsfgdjs as the real haha, judging from the YG comment threads and I love that! Despite her hyperness she doesn't seem too childish and she does seem like a woman her age (that makes her sounds incredibly old lol, sorry not my intention XD).

That's as far as my Sandara-knowledge goes. haha

I'd love to have them interact more! ♥

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moodmaking July 5 2012, 14:54:16 UTC
Haha, I'm glad! We've enjoyed all of your muses, too. <3 I'm glad she comes off that way, since she doesn't want to burden people with less bright moods. -gasp- how dare you! Calling her extra old. Lol, kidding, but I'm glad for that, too! I worry about her typing hyperness, since I know the real isn't necessarily like that in her blog, but some people, aka a particular person especially (you know who), just makes her that way. u_u;

Haha! Yes, let's have them interact more!

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reclothed July 5 2012, 14:58:40 UTC
.. really? I could have sworn the real would blog like that! haha It would fit her. XD

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moodmaking July 5 2012, 15:02:54 UTC
Oh, well... she DOES. But she doesn't alkjfakaljaalkfja, lol!!

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majissuka July 5 2012, 21:06:33 UTC
Boop boop I hope you don't mind me using this LJ to comment on Dara~~

All the times Yunho has interacted with Dara, he's loved it! She just has so much energy that it sort of wears off on him and he gets really hyper too. It's cool for him to have a friend he can spazz out with, so I hope in the future they can talk more! He does have a soft spot for those YG! ♥

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moodmaking July 6 2012, 15:40:05 UTC
Don't mind at all since I know you. ^-^

Oh, I'm glad! (u.u;) Yunho's a sweetheart so it's easy to talk to him. I honestly don't even remember what they talked about, but that's okay! 8) Leaves space for more conversations. <3 Those in YG are cool, after all. Lol kidding! But yes I hope they talk more!

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majissuka July 8 2012, 01:34:35 UTC


I don't remember what they talked about either LOL. But they should definitely spaz out soon! Maybe they should add each others journals? @_@; I thought i would ask you first so you weren't like "WHAT SHE DOIN?!?!"

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articulates July 6 2012, 18:53:37 UTC
I can't remember how long it has been since they've known each other... a year? Longer? Maybe ( ... )

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moodmaking July 6 2012, 19:12:00 UTC
Since like last year March. I remember this due to writing term papers in the library and her chatting to him, haha ( ... )

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articulates July 6 2012, 19:25:59 UTC
Oh yeah, I didn't like Dara much but I think your muse + her real finally growing up helped to chase the dislike away. Good thing too... And it's cool! He knows he can pester her with PMs whenever he feels like whether she's awake or asleep. n_nb

Nah, they're not too bad. I'm pretty sure you'd know when they would get overbearing anyway so I find that unnecessary to point out. I definitely think that she might seem 2D to some people, especially if said people have no idea what the real is like. This kinda links to the point down there too. Maybe more ~private~ posts might help her characterization a bit more? I know Dara was down about some things in their last scene.

Okay, will do. ♥ LMAO you... really...

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moodmaking July 6 2012, 19:31:27 UTC
ToT I'm glad! More for your dislike going away~! Lol, pester...... >__>

Ahhh, private posts. That's a good idea. I think private posts are something I need to work on in general with all my muses now that you mention it. u__u Thanks.

We'll leave my tech skills at that. Not saying anything else.

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