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Fanfiction (Harry Potter) - The Tower of Atonement

Feb 24, 2006 04:51

The Tower of Atonement

Short Story - Subject: Harry Potter - Rating: PG - Category: Drama/Romance

While on prefect duty Narcissa Black runs in to some trouble in the form of an invisible James Potter. Could this night somehow make up for the worst summer of her life? Or will it only serve to frazzle her nerves more?

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Comments 6

starry_night_53 February 25 2006, 10:52:58 UTC

that was nice. good interaction between the two and nice dialogue. interesting mystery behind it as well, with the ring and stuff, well done!

fireflys_locket February 25 2006, 10:54:09 UTC

Thank you very much.

anonymous February 26 2006, 01:28:44 UTC

Nice,very nice. Leaves you wanting more. Is Lucius behind the ring? What was she 'guarding'? What was James really doing there--alone? Thanks for mystery!
JILL

fluffyfledgling February 26 2006, 19:37:25 UTC

*squeetackleglomphugskisses ( ... )

fireflys_locket February 26 2006, 20:40:22 UTC

YaY! Oh, I'm so glad you liked it. I worked so hard on it. And yes... there's a lot there that will probably be in my chaptered Narcissa/James story... if I ever get around to it, of course.

Anyways... I love you so much. ♥

fluffyfledgling February 28 2006, 23:53:04 UTC

♥♥♥