Early Morning Departures III

[musclemuseum29]

Title: Early Morning Departures
Author: Stephie
Rating: NC-17 ?
Pairing: belldom
Disclaimer: Well they say it never happened...
Warning: Sex and swearing and violence.
Notes: Thanks everyone really, but especially xanium who beta'd this for me and put up with my shananningins and added some beautiful touches too. You're a gem : )

Comments

[xanium]

*squee* Just as I said I can't wait to see it posted!! Really loved this, the sex scene was so raw and passionate, the end was so intense and sad :(

Loved this:
"You’re beautiful,” you pant, “This, us…it’s beautiful.”"

And "This is love." You husk." Meow :P Really great!!! Loved helping out, thanks for letting me!

[musclemuseum29]

That'd be right, I post it up and think 'should I stay, should I go...?' and I miss your comment *sigh*
But thanks bella, a million times over :D And as for letting you?! I was going to beg you if you said no, and thought, well if I thrust it upon her it's harder to back out of... XD

[stefanyeah]

Aaaah.
Poor Matthew. *kicks-Dom-harshly*
You bastard.

[musclemuseum29]

Oi, watch out missy. Dom doesn't take too kindly to people who kick him- you might find yourself tied and 'enduring' his sexual ways... ;)

[stefanyeah]

Pft, I don't care.
He hurt Matthew, he has to pay.

[allwithwings]

Jesus, just rip my heart right out of my chest next time, why don't you, it'll be faster!

*lol*

No, but seriously, absolutely gripping stuff. I loved the visceral nature of this chapter, so heart-wrenching and violent.

I particularly liked Matt's subtle change in temperament, where he is no longer loving it all like he once used to, he's actually disgusted by it. That's some progress at least!

Anyway, I'll just reiterate my love of this story. It's fantastic!

[musclemuseum29]

Heh, sorry XD But that's what I was aiming for- and I'm glad it really came across (and I'll give you your heart back after the next part- it's going to be somewhat more painful and broken).
Admittedly I struggled a lot with Matt's temperament. I wanted him to be hurt and so betrayed that all he could act upon was violence and rage, but then feeling as if he really does need Dominic (and thus submitting), and I couldn't quite get them to conflict for ages. lol, you should've seen some of my dodgy starts! :S
*hugs* you're a gem love, and I've gotta say, your writing does inspire- speaking of which I spotted something new from you! *runs to take a peek*

[mandynau]

[musclemuseum29]

First of all, I'm exceptionally flattered *grins* It really has made my day; you're such a very talented writer yourself, so it means heaps.*hugs* And dark can be good :) (Though I've got an idea tossing around in my head that's a lot lighter) *blush* I always thought my cliff hangers were a little dodged, so thank you love :)
Again, that really has made my day (cor, I'm grinning like a doofus here) *hugs*

[mandynau]

[dutchweirdo]

Oh.
My.
Goodness.

So this is what happens to women who let themselves get abused over and over and over again!

Blimey. *thinks Stockholm Syndrome*

Matt's right....this has to end.

Not the story, tho!!!! I love it! Keep going, cos it's super. I love how you build up tension and have the atmosphere fill with electric rage. Well done!

Can't wait to read more of this!

[musclemuseum29]

..I can't believe Stockholm Syndrome never crossed my mind during this *slaps self* damn it.
Aw thanks hun :) I think there's only one more part of this though...a part and half lol...
The question is, though, can Matt end this? (seriously, I'm torn between two endings here!)