Early Morning Departures

[musclemuseum29]

Title: Early Morning Departures
Author: mm29
Rating: medium 16?
Pairing: belldom
Summary: There's only so much that one can take.
Disclaimer: I own zilch.
*Warning:* Just language for the moment, though in future -if there is one for this- it will become more violent, dark and slashy.. .
Notes: A supermassive thank you to

Comments

[exiled_girl]

Aw my, I thought I commented on this yesterday. Silly me. :p

Dom! You sexy bastard! Why don't you stay on the mornings hmm? That way you can have a morning snack too. *coughcough* >:p

Joking though, you portrayed the need and want perfectly. I like how Matt thinks sex will be enough and that he is just being feminine but then wants more. It just shows that love and wants aren't gendered. You made a good point there.

More? More.

[musclemuseum29]

I know! What on earth is wrong with Dom!? Why would you not stay with that little sex god! .<
Thank you so much *grins* I'm so glad you picked up on that, and there'll definitely be more

[semi_shadowed]

So so sad, yet beautiful at the same time- you have a lovely style of writing, really absorbing to read. Can't wait for more, I really want to see where this will go- I get the feeling it won't be a happy ending though :( xx

[musclemuseum29]

..Wow..just.. XD Thank you! I'm exceptionally flattered *hugs*
Mmm too be honest, I'm not sure with the ending yet- I have a few idea, and each ending seems to go from happy-medium to hatred to angst, to bitter sweet.. I don't know lol, I think I'll just go with what feels right. I need someone to throw ideas around with XD
But thank you :D

[stefanyeah]

Oh wow, that's good. Well, not good story wise, say heart tearing?
I wanna cuddle poor ickle Matthew.

Thanks for the add, too. ^.^

[musclemuseum29]

Anytime >.< I only realised last night that you wrote the vampire fic with Matt and Dom, and because I haven't reviewed it, I just wanted to say how much I adore it- At first I thought nah, this isn't going to work for me, but you write so beautifully that I was captivated by your words and then I fell in love with the story so I'm very glad I'm following it :D
Thanks for the comment :P

[stefanyeah]

Aawwww. Now I'm blushing.
Thank you very much.
*huggles*

[butter_cup01]

This was painfully beautiful. Really well done for your first post (first of many, i hope). I think you captured Matt's pain very well, and it was really believable. And the last part was just so sad =(

I loved it! And i hope to read more from you :)

[musclemuseum29]

*grins* I'm buzzing now :) Thank you! And gods am I glad Matt was believable, I remember wondering if he sounded slightly too feminine, but then...something like this would really hurt you regardless of your gender.
I hope to have more up soon, unfortunately schools a whore with all its assignments and junk *sigh*

[mandynau]

[musclemuseum29]

I think I just melted over your pic :) I love the pose he's in, and what he's wearing, with that beautiful guitar on his back, the sea and dusky sky *groans* I love it :)
Fluff is always good :) And having said that, this is going to become a little-who am I kidding- a lot more angsty and violent before it gets better XD
Thank you heaps though, "you brought the emotions over so easily with your words, they hit really deep", has me grinning like the madman I am! That really meant a lot *hugs*