SOO SOOPER LATE! part 1murinaeNovember 15 2007, 01:26:32 UTC
Sorry that it's a bit late! It's not as much of a Halloween fic, but one inspired by November rain (or the wish for November rain!) and the fact that it's Armistice/Veteran's/Remembrance day in many countries. Hopefully, plain ninja is okay? I'll try pirates next time
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Touya Kouyo. A name powerful enough to belong on any of the black stones before him. He had enough power, it was rumored, to beat Kuwabara and become Ishikage, if he so wished
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Touya Kouyo hesistated a moment, then nodded sharply once. "The ishikage stones ..."
It was not quite a question. Touya Kouyo would never bend that far.
But Hikaru fingered the jacket on his shoulders.
"Not me. It's because ..." Hikaru gestured vaguely towards his chest. "I ... it ... the past is important, isn't it? I need to know that now, don't I?"
Touya Kouyo merely accepted that answer with another nod.
"Itshould'vebeenyou." Hikaru blurted out in the awkward silence. "This, him, it ... all of this ..." He knew, in a gut deep way that if Sai had been paired with Touya Kouyo ... "there'd be less names on that wall later and ... it ..."
It was only for a moment, but he saw a flicker in Touya Kouyo's face, a deep yearning that matched the roiling sensation in his chest. Sai. Kouyo. It was a match, perfect, he could feel it
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Just that you know, I'm bowing down in appreciation now. This is beautiful done, nuanced and subtle, without being sentimental. Love the mystery behind it. ^^
oh gods, he is so good at being just good. You know i went to type his title then remember in this AU he dosn't have one. Well i bet he DOES but we havn't been told it. Oh man my hat i soff and i am standing on it dear. These are actually really really good all in a row.
Er, more ninja would be cool. Or... NINJA V. PIRATES. (I am such a kid!)
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It was not quite a question. Touya Kouyo would never bend that far.
But Hikaru fingered the jacket on his shoulders.
"Not me. It's because ..." Hikaru gestured vaguely towards his chest. "I ... it ... the past is important, isn't it? I need to know that now, don't I?"
Touya Kouyo merely accepted that answer with another nod.
"Itshould'vebeenyou." Hikaru blurted out in the awkward silence. "This, him, it ... all of this ..." He knew, in a gut deep way that if Sai had been paired with Touya Kouyo ... "there'd be less names on that wall later and ... it ..."
It was only for a moment, but he saw a flicker in Touya Kouyo's face, a deep yearning that matched the roiling sensation in his chest. Sai. Kouyo. It was a match, perfect, he could feel it ( ... )
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