"I Wanna F*** You like an Animal" 5/6

Jul 19, 2008 23:31

Title:"I Wanna F*** You like an Animal"
Author:Murd3r4lyf3
5/6
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Yaoi!smex, AU
Pairing: ShiHan
Warnings: Bathroom!Smex
Summary: Siwon just want to relax and have bible study. but his pesky little puppy just wants to get 'dirty'...
Word Count: 1566
Author’s note: Sorry for not updating soon, but i was working on my future comic...XDD well ( Read more... )

i wanna f*** you like an animal, super junior

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murd3r4lyf3 July 20 2008, 03:48:31 UTC
SPOT FOR MARY

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Sorry I'm So Late!!!! kichul1106 July 20 2008, 23:41:12 UTC
waah so sorry for being late, but i see you had a lot of comments XDD
okay now onto the story! <3

. Siwon looked up from his bible, and muttered a soft swear.
LOL siwon and his bible! haha ooooh he sweared! :o lol

He stopped when he caught sight of a small brown pug coming his way.
awwww hannie's soooo cute!!! XDD

Then he glanced up, and his eyebrows shoot off in the air.
LOL Siwon's eyebrows...classic! XD

"What in god’s name?" Siwon started, and walked a little towards his former pet. Hangeng’s eyes follow him.
whoa he swore!! :o

"You…are a devil’s dog aren’t you?" Siwon yelled, and pointed accusingly at the male in the tub. Hangeng’s smile faded when his master yelled at him. He sank back into the tub and whimpered.
LOL does he need an arrowhead bottle? lolol aww poor hannie got yelled at >< don't worry, siwon will forgive you ( ... )

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Re: Sorry I'm So Late!!!! murd3r4lyf3 July 20 2008, 23:44:33 UTC
XDD
yea
gotta like THY ShiBrows and the bible
XDDD
XDDD
arrowhead!!!
lols
YEAA one last chappie
posting it tomorrow, and ima do a poll, on which pairing they like best...yea

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Re: Sorry I'm So Late!!!! kichul1106 July 20 2008, 23:48:38 UTC
lolol! yuppp shibrows! WIN! XDDD

oooh darn...it's going to be hard to choose!!! *cries* will there be a all of the above choice? XDDD

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raintree123 July 20 2008, 04:58:07 UTC
gooooooooooooddddddddddddddddd but not as good as your eunhae one u should write more eunhae please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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murd3r4lyf3 July 20 2008, 05:13:14 UTC
yea, for some reason, ima not that good with hanchul, shihan, and kangteuk.
ima best with Eunhae, Kihae, KiEunHae, Yewook, Kyumin, and the last pairing for my series
*HOPEFULLY! i can do a round 2 for this series

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happy_gogogo July 20 2008, 05:39:20 UTC
OMO-NA! YOU OFFICIALLY OWN MY SOUL NOW. FOR SRS. Can't wait for the last (awwww) chapter!

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murd3r4lyf3 July 20 2008, 05:40:02 UTC
MU HAW HAW!!!
ur soul..IS MINE!!!
lols
writting the last chappie now!!!

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kittypoker July 20 2008, 06:11:16 UTC
Oh darn! I was sort of hoping that Siwon would be the animal... A horse or something because his nickname in EHB was Horse.. *pouts* Oh well I guess! This was still amazingly... HOT! And totally interesting because I myself have a pug and man that just makes it all better in sooooo many ways! *groans slightly to self*

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murd3r4lyf3 July 20 2008, 06:13:29 UTC
XDD
i was thinking a horsey siwonnie as well
but, it dosen't look appealing to me, not as cute as a puppy!hannie.
But thankies, for ur comment!!!

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kittypoker July 20 2008, 22:52:02 UTC
Cute puppy!Hannie is VERY appealing! I just thought it would be humorous if Horse!Siwon was in it. Your welcome for the comment!

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haybuui3 July 20 2008, 06:59:24 UTC
shihan smex. amazing shihan smex. <3

aww hangeng was so adorable!
"Brown dog-ears dripped by his head, and a little tail wiggling on his behing. His black hair was wet, and framed his delicate foreign face."
i can totally imagine puppy!hannie. he would be so cute. :]

the whole thing was hott
"The human spread the butt cheeks, and blew into the hole. He experiments with licking around the sides before pushing his tongue into the puckered hole. When he felt his pet shudder, he started to trust into the hole faster."
*____*

puppy!hannie trying to make shiwon better was such a cute idea.

and i loved how you ended it

"Meanwhile Hangeng flushed and crawled towards Siwon. And muzzled his head into Siwon’s neck, giving a small kiss or two.

"Siwonnie…"

He didn’t get to finish because Siwon sealed his mouth shut with a kiss."
aww they are so lovable together. <3

personally, i think this was the best one out of the whole series :] hope you write more shihan in the future!

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murd3r4lyf3 July 20 2008, 07:02:05 UTC
XDD
yay long comments!!
XDD
Yea, Puppy!Hannie is really cuteee
you think so? Guess my 1st attempt to write ShiHan didn'[t droop..XDD
May have a second round of this series, so watch out, Puppy!Hannie may be back

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haybuui3 July 20 2008, 07:14:27 UTC
puppy!hannie is adorable <3

...actually now that i think about it, i'd really like to see how shiwon deals with having a boy with puppy ears and a tail in his life. hannie will probably be harder to take care of now that he can talk. and i wonder how siwon's friends would react :]

really? i hope puppy!hannie comes back :]

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murd3r4lyf3 July 20 2008, 16:08:30 UTC
XDDDD
u'll be surpirsed at the ending...
*kukuku
yea, thinkin of doing a squel, cuz i have More smutty ideas

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