[fic] Obsession (PG-13) Yunho/Jaejoong

[muramatsu_aoi]

Title: Obsession
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-15
Disclaimer: I don’t own the boys, nor the lyrics
Summary: you are an obsession
I cannot sleep

Comments

[andraangel5]

Omo O__o...this was beautiful and sooo intriguing at the same time!!!

I LOVEEE this:

"Downy lashes falling on softly closed eyes, a slight smile playing on those lips when Yunho desperately presses kisses after kisses; tears mingling with breath. He looks so calm, so peaceful, that Yunho can’t find the heart to try wake him up. Jaejoong has always been beautiful, but he had never looked so ethereal before that day of parting; that ethereal face he takes with him to keep in his heart forever."

the way you picture Jae in this gave me such a sensation, like an entire mixture of feelings!

Aoiiii! This is great, really! I fond myself watching Yunho, like sitting besides him as he was watching the children.
This was angst for me dear, never laughed while reading it! You described this moment so good and left so many unanswered questions as well.

Thank you sooo much for this! Arigatooo ^____^
I enjoyed every part of it!
<33333 *huggles you tight*

[muramatsu_aoi]

andra-chaaannnn!!~~ ohayou~~

im so so glad the angst part turned out alright..was half-asleep when this cracky idea struck me, so wasnt sure it was going to work..

for two seconds, thought you would brick me for converting yunho's obsession w kids into something sinister. XD

*squishes you like yunho's bambi*.. <33333

btw..have you seen the footage of dbsk at a piano prodigy's house(dun remember the name right now)..i think after that they had a sort of concert with her...

[andraangel5]

hehe...brick you...neee! he does have an obsession, doesn't he? but it's sooo cute! i remember reading something about him, and he was saying he wishes time would pass faster so he could be 30. i think he really wants to be a dad!

omg...only yesterday i was talking to my friend about me wanting to be huggable like bambi sooo thank youuuu!!!

yep saw that one, he was so cute carrying her and taking care of her all through the performance. i remember they were singing "You raise me up", and after Yunho gave her chocolates and she gave one to him to.

<33333

[muramatsu_aoi]

he was saying he wishes time would pass faster so he could be 30.

omg!!!~~ i swear my heartbeat kicked up a notch...^/////^

dunno..kids just seem to *gravitate* to him ne..in fact havent seen many pics of the other dbsk members with kids..loooved the way he just held her on his lap throughout, whispering to her like that..he'd really make a great gentle appa ^///^ someone tell me why am i blushing right now

btw did you see the previous part? the one where they all go to her house...jae starts cooking for her (band umma that he is) while the others go play..?

[lunarrays]

i really felt Yunho's heartbreak and determenation.
it's kinda sad that he's trying to recreate a loss love, but, sometimes the heart makes us do things that the mind has to question.

really good, and never did I snort with laughter once, in fact i almost started crying.

so sad...

[muramatsu_aoi]

he's trying to recreate a loss love, but, sometimes the heart makes us do things that the mind has to question

*gives a tight hug*

wow!~~I was apprehensive whethr people would get the angst part of it---but thank you thank you sooo much..im really touched & relieved...

thanks again for reading bb <3

yikessss~~~ gomennn!

[sacchlovedbsk]

omg!!! i'm late!! ><
will be back!! *goes up to read* ^^

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[sacchlovedbsk]

aoi~~~
this is so sad, it hurts!><

omg, i love this lines the most,bb:

The faint lines along his face fade away, the harsh set of his jaw disappears, he turns around when he grasps his hand. They are running together towards the sunset, hand-in-hand, and as he gazes into the mysterious haunting depths of those eyes, it feels like he has finally come home after a long tiring day.

gawd, yunjae not together in the end~~
*mentally transforms the woman into jae instead* ><

and this too,bb. heartbreakingggg~~~ TT-TT!:

He grasps his youngest by the chin, tilting his face, searching for any sign, any trace of him- those perfect lips, the porcelain skin, the depthless eyes.

It was hard to recreate such perfection, such elegance.

And he had failed.

"Again"

just the word "again" is enough to unravel me,bb.

all in all, such a beautiful piece of writing,aoi-chann~~ thank you!! domo arigatou for the dedication!! *blushing happily* ><

<3 <3 <3

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[muramatsu_aoi]

mentally transforms the woman into jae instead*

LOL!!!~~I'm really rolling with laughter at this!!~~

But I think thats what we're *all* tempted to do in our fics ne..

its really sweet of you to read bb *huggles*..hope the writers-block-combined-with-stress has gone away by now..

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[sacchlovedbsk]

hehe. *the woman has now became jaejoongie* ><

yup!!! moichiru!! dangyunghaji!!of course!!

cneifhuc!! in a way,bb. i think i'm pushing myself too hard!! kihkih! thanksieeesss!!

it was a pleasure to read this!!
p/s: can you make jae stays with yunnie next time? puhweeezeee?
*puppy eyes* fluff?? *major puppy eyes*

[shonamukhi]

OMG!yunjae!T_T.its so sad

[muramatsu_aoi]

good god! this was written so long back I had to double check & confirm is was me!!

XD thank you for reading though

[shonamukhi]

OMG..I JUST NOW SAW THE DATE WHEN U WROTE THIS!! 3 YEARS!!O_O...
its a great story..ppl must read this and comment..^^..