Comments | mummyluvr314: Fic: One Last Time (1/1)

mummyluvr314

Fic: One Last Time (1/1)

Jun 04, 2009 21:44

Title: One Last Time
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Slash; Dean/Castiel
Summary: Dean was sorry. He really was. He hadn’t meant to do it, to ruin the one thing he had, but now that he had it - forever, even - he was going to make things right. He was going to prove that humanity could be ok.
Words: 2300
A/N: A while back, strangeandcharm wrote a list of ten Dean/Cas clichés ( Read more... )

d/c, i majored in stupidity, season 4, fanfic, supernatural

Comments 15

klutzy_girl June 5 2009, 02:56:52 UTC

Hee. I saw that list too, and I recognized a few.

This was a good fic. I liked it.

mummyluvr314 June 5 2009, 03:00:09 UTC

Thanks. I wasn't sure if this is serious serious, or funny serious. Like, it's funny because it's serious... y'know? *confuses self*

blualbino June 5 2009, 03:09:49 UTC

Wow, that's pretty good for something written off a list of things I hate. Awesome, actually :)

The line about the chapped lips made me want to cringe in a corner though...

mummyluvr314 June 5 2009, 03:14:08 UTC

Yeah, it still makes me cringe, too. I tried to lighten the blow by making them bloody, too, hopefully implying some kinda fight, but... it still hurts. I actually did cringe when I wrote it.

devilyouwere June 5 2009, 03:12:06 UTC

Okay, I will admit, I giggled most of the way through because of the purposely placed cliches (which were fantastic), but near the end, my heart got a little soft and the last lines were just... wow. I don't even know. It made me sad, but happy, you know? I can't even really explain it. It hurts, but in the really good way. Just the image of them laying in bed together, just smiling, as everything fell apart. *flaps hands* ♥

mummyluvr314 June 5 2009, 03:15:19 UTC

Yeah, I had a hard time writing this one because of the cliches. Made my heart hurt, but I was hoping the end would act like a band-aid on a gigantic gaping wound.

Thanks!

darkmagess June 5 2009, 03:21:50 UTC

I'm glad I wasn't the only person who saw that list and went "omg, challenge!" And you know what? For a pastiche of cliches, I think you totally pulled it off. :)

mummyluvr314 June 5 2009, 03:23:43 UTC

Yay! *does victory dance* Thanks so much!

solar_cat June 5 2009, 03:59:01 UTC

Wow. I think this fic just dislocated my brain. ...I mean that in a good way, actually. Because... there was all this badfic stuff, but in a good fic, and my poor little brain kept trying to make sense of it all. XD

So yes. Nice work, taking all of that and turning it into something worth reading (even if I did want to cry a bit with the whole chapped lips/benediction part, just on principle).