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Fic - City of Elusion - (5/?) - Ten/Rose - T

Feb 20, 2008 21:05

Date Published: 3rd October 2007
Title: City of Elusion
Rating: T
Characters: Ten/Rose, OC Hemlock, OC Jezera Mewlan, OC Mägdraz
Genre(s): Horror, mystery, action/adventure, romance, suspence, thriller, supernatural.
Word Count: This part: 2,214
Summary: Ignorance. Fear. Mistrust. Destiny. The tale of what happens when two worlds collide. TenRose.
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theme: mystery, status: work in progress, theme: action/adventure, fic type: tenth doctor fic, theme: romance, warning: adult content, theme: thriller, theme: sci-fi, fic: city of elusion, ship: ten/rose, character: rose tyler, theme: suspense, theme: angst, theme: hurt/comfort

Comments 11

lostwolfchats February 20 2008, 21:33:08 UTC

Soooooo glad to see more of this - I've been patiently (okay, not very patiently) waiting for a new chapter so this made my evening.... more soon?!!!!

avoria February 20 2008, 21:37:21 UTC

Awww! Well, that's very pleasant to hear :D I've started on the next chapter (well, I say next... I'm usually one or two chapters ahead of myself) already, so expect to see this one soon.

Glad you like ^____^

shinyopals February 20 2008, 21:43:17 UTC

Glad to see he's out and will hopefully be kicking bum soon! Rose needs to be rescued!

The whole thing with the Doctor talking to Jezera was fab and very IC. Looking forward to more! :-)

avoria February 20 2008, 21:47:29 UTC

Eeee *claps*. I'm pleased to hear things being IC. It makes me happy ^__^

As for Rose being rescued... I hate to burst your bubble... but we're just getting to the tip of the ice-berg :P

=D

brilliantomega February 20 2008, 22:08:02 UTC

Oh noes! Poor trusting Doctor. Poor Rose!

Love it - I really like the whole picture this story creates and I look forward to more.

avoria February 21 2008, 12:28:10 UTC

*grins*

Poor both of them, I think. Thanks for following.

Oh, and, I love your icon =]

rjrog77 February 20 2008, 23:35:20 UTC

Glad to see more of this!

Also intrigued by Jezera - not entirely convinced she's as much "on the level" as the Doctor thinks she is - presumably he isn't as trusting of her as he appears to be in this?

And that last bit, where Rose thinks she's seeing her mum (I'm assuming it's just another trick?), is making me want the next bit already ;)

avoria February 21 2008, 12:29:40 UTC

presumably he isn't as trusting of her as he appears to be in this?

Well, now... that would be telling ;) For the moment, she's the only thing he has...

The trouble is, I keep thinking of arcs to the story and wanting to add them in. So even I don't know entirely which way it's going. Although I do, of course, have an idea ;)

unbrokensky February 21 2008, 06:28:26 UTC

Yay, you updated! =D I'm enjoying this fic so much. Your OC's are great, and I have a very intense love/hate relationship with your cliffhangers. FANTASTIC.

avoria February 21 2008, 12:31:39 UTC

Hah, I just had a look back through at my cliffhangers.

I'm so sorry! They don't seem cliffhanger-y to me, because I know what's going to happen. But, heh, I'm sure there'll be at least one non-cliffhanger xD