Fic: Silhouette

[mukku_fan]

07:06 AM

Rosette Merchant did not believe in God.  She was in fact firmly opposed to the idea that there was any sort of benevolent Being residing in Heaven or anywhere else.  Even if a spiritual presence existed, she doubted that it had the time or will to care about mankind in general, much less about her as an individual like her parents had

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ASDFGHJKL

[crescent_moony]

This was PHENOMENAL. OMG. :'D

Re: ASDFGHJKL

[mukku_fan]

LONG REVIEWS ARE AWESOME, AND THEY DESERVE SOME CIEL ICONAGE. -throws- I was actually really nervous when I saw I had a comment from you on this post. I dunno why. I'm kind of silly like that sometimes. :P

One, I LOVE that you brought it back to the amusement park.

Lol, as I said, that was Ciel's fault. First they were at a diner, then at a youth retreat. Then Ciel got pissiery and threatened me until I plopped them down in the amusement park. XD

AND ROSETTE SENSED IT. I love how she could sense the demonic wafting from him, as it were, which is one of the reasons she didn't like him!

I IZ GLAD YOU LIKED THAT~ I wasn't sure if I was going to be able to pull that off. I actually deleted it at one point, and then had to rewrite it when that section didn't flow right because of it.

though I squealed and let out a verbal "FUCK~" when Christopher was talking about how they had to tell Father D about Sebastian.YES~ My work here is done. :'D That was another one of those details that I was thinking about deleting, but

Re: ASDFGHJKL

[crescent_moony]

INORITE? I love long reviews. I wish I got them more often. XD; ♥ And I totally understand! When I post things for one person specifically, I get really nervous, too, until I see what they have to say. XD

Re: ASDFGHJKL

[mukku_fan]

Me, too! And me too!

It is, it is! Especially when people pick up on really tiny details that make or break a fic's meaning. Not that I really had any of that here, but yeah. :D Well, to give Sebastian credit, he has been around for quite a while... :P

Grelle's car was another thing I waffled about, actually. I have no idea why, because it's not important in any way whatsoever, but I thought to myself, "Hannah will yell at me if I don't make this kick-ass enough, so..." XD;;;

Yeah, I thought you might. Like I said, crazy headcanon is crazy. Hmm, that seems like something that should be, in dunno, in a fic somewhere eventually. XD

I know, right? Then Ciel would have kicked Chris in the shins and Rosette would have started beating up Ciel, and....yeah. Total. Bloodbath. D:

Me, too! This is such an interesting little world you've allowed us to see. I like it a lot~ ♥