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muggy_mountain

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Jan 12, 2009 14:54

Title: Held In
Fandom: FFX
Characters: Lulu/Wakka
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 348
Notes: Yeah, so. I guess I just wrote a Lulu/Wakka. Whut.

( Your hair smells nice... )

wakka, fanfic, lulu

Comments 15

siva630 January 12 2009, 22:17:42 UTC

omg I love Lulu/Wakka. This was sweet. :)

(nitpick: you need a "to" instead of "too" in second line of third paragraph)

muggy_mountain January 12 2009, 22:21:17 UTC

Am replaying! Seeing it more this time around, fersure.

siva630 January 12 2009, 22:30:06 UTC

Yay! I need to go back and play again, too. Such a beautiful, powerful game - whose beauty and power wasn't even destroyed by Worst Voice-Acting Ever (TM)!

One of these days (read: probably ~five year from now) I will get off my ass and write an epic Lulu/Wakka I've been planning that ties in with Beclem/Chappu - with bonus Chappu/Lulu! (And maybe Lulu/Beclem if I can fit it in. [Providing Lulu isn't too bored of all teh cock by then, lol.])

IT WILL (possibly) BE HARDCOAR.

muggy_mountain January 13 2009, 00:21:22 UTC

Ahahaha, Beclem/Chappu. You know, I can apparently kind of see that.

venefica_aura January 12 2009, 22:38:20 UTC

Awww, you're reminding me why I like these two! It continues in my tradition of kind of adoring the ones in FF games that actually get married. I don't know why either.

But yes, I liked all the images! Maybe I'll eventually sometime read some of your other recent stuff. XD

~Cendri

muggy_mountain January 13 2009, 00:23:29 UTC

Thank you! I was not much a fan to start with, but I've grown to have some kind of fondness for the ship. And no worries, the other stuff will always probably be waiting for when you feel like hoping over!

auronlu January 12 2009, 23:29:29 UTC

Perfect interaction, with Wakka being smarter than I realized he was at first. I couldn't understand them for so long. I finally see they work, it's just... different.
This was fun to read, and just a little different from your usual muse to suit them well.

muggy_mountain January 13 2009, 00:25:24 UTC

Yeah, Wakka's a bit of an obstinate fellow, but I think he's quicker to learn than some give him credit.

I'm glad you like it --I wasn't expecting it, so much!

animecrush January 13 2009, 03:32:53 UTC

Aw, I like this little piece. It definitely proves to me that Lulu/Wakka can totally work. Plus reading this makes me want to get back to some writing myself.

muggy_mountain January 13 2009, 03:36:06 UTC

Thanks! And you should totally come back to the dark side FFX pile! I miss your Seymour!

owlmoose January 13 2009, 07:45:17 UTC

I like a lot of the little things about this piece: the way you describe Lulu's body language, and how Wakka likes her "pretend-angry", and the low-stress way they come together, and your tweak at the sometimes overly-poetic language of kissing.

I enjoy it when you write Wakka; you have a nice voice for him.