LJI S9.4, “Nobody can ride your back if your back's not bent"

[muchtooarrogant]

Dan was exiting the shower when he heard the suspicious noise from the bedroom

Comments

[eska818]

This is really cute, and the beginning had me fooled - I thought it was going to go to a much darker place than it did. XD

[muchtooarrogant]

Thank you! Nah, this week I was determined to write something completely lighthearted.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Dan

[baxaphobia]

This was so cute! I am smiling!

[muchtooarrogant]

Ah good, that must mean I did something right! *smile*

Many thanks!

Dan

[buddyhollylover]

Ah, so much dialogue. Perfect for coming up with interesting voices when we record this.

[muchtooarrogant]

LOL This piece was a joy for me to write because, aside from a few minor descriptors, it was all dialogue, my favorite thing. I REALLY wanted to put in that old Peter Pan Peanut butter jingle, but finally decided against it. "Picky people pick Peter Pan Peanut butter, it's the peanut butter picky people pick."

Have fun! *grin*

Dan

[witchwife]

This was so wonderful & endearing that I almost feel guilty about the impending recording.

Thanks a lot.

[muchtooarrogant]

Why thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

And, no need to feel guilty, I did sorta ask for it, after all. *chuckle* Thing is, I don't know if you two are "involved," at all, but I did my best to write in a bit of a cuddle scene for you at the end. Enjoy!

Dan

[witchwife]

Very considerate of you.

haha buddyhollylover and I aren't involved, but we'll enjoy the hell out of reading this.

Mark my words..

[muchtooarrogant]

I'm looking forward to it. :)

Dan

[i_will_not_say]

This was playful and cute! :)

[muchtooarrogant]

Thank you! That was the tone I was shooting for, so glad it worked. :)

Dan