The Birth and Death of Clouds

[muchtooarrogant]

A writing exercise for worldofscribble
(With apologies to the gamers on my Flist.) *smirk*

Comments

[sweeny_todd]

hah.

nice move from active fantasy to, well, reality!

do you watch anime? there is a series called Sword Art Online, which is basically about being inside an RPG game. it was really good!

[muchtooarrogant]

No, I've never really read or watched any anime. Thanks for the recommendation though, sounds like it might be fun to check out.

Dan

[sweeny_todd]

I think that Sword Art Online has a manga as well... (the comic side).

I forgot about the vision thing - I am so sorry :-(

[muchtooarrogant]

Ah, tis okay. I'll mention it to one of my daughter's friends who likes anime and is also an aspiring artist the next time we're at one of my daughter's basketball games. I can look all cool and knowledgeable, for about ten seconds. LOL

Dan

[lrig_rorrim]

As someone who stayed up until after two in the morning TRYING to kill the stoooooopid final boss of the game we've been playing... yeah. Hi. I relate. ;)

[muchtooarrogant]

Hahaha, somehow I thought you might.

I started out wanting to do something intricate with the main character's planned suicide, but I just didn't have any time left once I finally began writing. I'm going to have to start staying up nights again to get enough time. LOL

Dan

[jem0000000]

Lol, I have a video game that randomly plays, "Aren't you tired?" as a system message if it's after midnight when you're playing. *grin*

[muchtooarrogant]

Hahaha, my girls' xbox needs to do that. We never let them stay up that late unless it's the weekend, but still.

Dan

[herecirm]

Hahaha! I love how the tone changed, it has a great ending - the last line especially. :P

[muchtooarrogant]

Thank you! *smile* The primary reason for the change of tone was me looking up and going, "Oh shit, I've only got like ten minutes to finish this, post it in my journal, and get the link up in AWOS."

Dan