I am in love with my best friend

[mt_cute]

 TItle : am in love with my best friend
Author: MT_Cute
pairing : kyuhyun/you ,sungmin/ you 
summery: kyuhyun falling in love with you and you love sungmin >>> i am suck in the summery

Characters

kyuhyun sungmin you yoona
Description

this is my first fanfic plz support me

I am 16 years old and I was studying in high school

My name is _____(your name) ,

Comments

SUPER! Like *WHOA*

[m0nyq]

i like it. i really want to read more. like... really really really willing to know more. *EATING THE LAPTOP*

i have never written a fanfic before but i can give you some advice (you can take it or not) from my literature class:

i think you should put more description of the place and try to describe more the feelings of the characters.

BUT I REALLY WANT MORE!!! XD

Re: SUPER! Like *WHOA*

[mt_cute]

Ofcorse i will take your advice dear
I will try my best
please always advise me :)